Motherly Array
From One Mother F***** to Another2 total reviews
Comment from Brian Taylor1
Wow!. What hatred. I couldn't help but love the realness. Your, or the character's, emotions lit up the screen to where even the picture did it no justice. Somebody that stirs up that much anger through passion and sparks that much creativity would be impossible to hate, to me anyway. I mean how can the driving force to the fire in your soul be seemingly despised? Love and hate make up the human being. What's in the middle just feed's off either one, or even both combined. Good honest poem.
reply by the author on 10-May-2019
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Wow!. What hatred. I couldn't help but love the realness. Your, or the character's, emotions lit up the screen to where even the picture did it no justice. Somebody that stirs up that much anger through passion and sparks that much creativity would be impossible to hate, to me anyway. I mean how can the driving force to the fire in your soul be seemingly despised? Love and hate make up the human being. What's in the middle just feed's off either one, or even both combined. Good honest poem.
Comment Written 10-May-2019
reply by the author on 10-May-2019
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Hi,
Sorry, but it?s I who must pay homage to your sincere outlying of emotions. On my side the hatred, unfortunately, is real. The real tragedy is that no one receives training on how to be a mother. In reality, most should never have been submitted to the challenge. - Lobber
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Hello,
I?m glad you liked my Mother Array poem. . .and for the 5 stars. Also, thank you for your interest in following my works. They range from off the wall, to outrageous, to very dark. Some of my lighter works include - Pubic Hair Not Excluded, Ambushed, Mayor's Nude Erection Is Overdue, Shall I Make It to The Hearse On Time and Pass the Pancakes Please. My more complicated poems include - Wall to Wall Walls and Sensual Asian Gardening 101.
I really like your poem Theft. I once owned two land tortoises and I I know the angst of the responsibility for having two very weird creatures in my home. I believe Deliha eventually died of some rare fungus I brought back from the Amazon. It may have been the gin.
- Lobber
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Do you mean 'offal' or 'oval' ? Offal is raw entrails, so Offal will fit better. I enjoyed your fun write and not all Mother's are good! You turned this contest on it's head here and I enjoyed your inventive write, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 10-May-2019
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Do you mean 'offal' or 'oval' ? Offal is raw entrails, so Offal will fit better. I enjoyed your fun write and not all Mother's are good! You turned this contest on it's head here and I enjoyed your inventive write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 10-May-2019
reply by the author on 10-May-2019
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Hello,
Thank you for catching this before it hits the masses...I really appreciate your time and supportive comments... by now most know my ?stuff? is a little off the wall - ranging from heavy to fun. - Lobber
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Thank you,
I feel my style is not in keeping with the FS image of wholesomeness. Pleases, convince me if I?m wrong. - Lobber
