Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

This was a great choice for the contest... and love the pairing of it with the wonderfully meditative plea of your final line! :) ;) Thank you so very much for joining us for our romp into the realm of 'new words'! :) :) Y. M.

 Comment Written 12-May-2019

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reply by the author on 15-May-2019

Thanks for reading and your kind feedback.

Comment from Henry King

Excellent

Almost, but no brass ring, the third line has nine syllables. "Show (1) us (2) the (3) light (4) so (5) we (6) may (7) find (8) light (9). Edit it or withdraw it. The vision is right on and Veda may be obscure to most.

 Comment Written 10-May-2019

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reply by the author on 11-May-2019

Thanks for the spot Henry...I intentionally made nine, so obviously shouldn't have been drinking beer when I wrote it. Has been changed. Much appreciated!

reply by Henry King on 11-May-2019

You are welcome.

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-A very nice image
for your poem.
-The syllable count is good.
-A good obscure word, too.
-You have used your word well
and have good description.
-The message is an effective one.
-The world is certainly complex,
and we need a way to find peace.
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 10-May-2019

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reply by the author on 15-May-2019

Thanks for reading and your kind feedback. Appreciate the spot. Corrected early. I vow to quit posting after two beers!

reply by Pam (respa) on 16-May-2019

You are quite welcome. I revised your review.

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

The word 'Veda' is meaningfully and expressively used as explained the application of the word in today's practice of living, to show light for peace in life; well said, well done. Write to inspire, readable for years -- DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 10-May-2019

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reply by the author on 15-May-2019

Thanks for reading and your kind feedback. I appreciate both.