They drive me wild
What things annoy you contest entry3 total reviews
Comment from Xia Thornwood
A long list can give a good style for listing annoyances. Your grammar and spelling, as far as I noticed, is impeccable. Just a couple things. First, you might want to give it a more solid ending. And second, it would be helpful to have a smoother switch between the full sentences with which you began, and the fragments with which you continued. All in all, though, it was straightforward, clear, and relatable. And fit the contest rules well.
reply by the author on 31-May-2019
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A long list can give a good style for listing annoyances. Your grammar and spelling, as far as I noticed, is impeccable. Just a couple things. First, you might want to give it a more solid ending. And second, it would be helpful to have a smoother switch between the full sentences with which you began, and the fragments with which you continued. All in all, though, it was straightforward, clear, and relatable. And fit the contest rules well.
Comment Written 31-May-2019
reply by the author on 31-May-2019
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Dear Xia, Thank you for your comments and suggestions.
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My pleasure!
Comment from pome lover
wow, I hope I don't offend by saying that is some list.
I think perhaps I will just say good luck in the contest and...
I hope you have an even longer list of things that make you happy.
pome lover
reply by the author on 10-May-2019
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wow, I hope I don't offend by saying that is some list.
I think perhaps I will just say good luck in the contest and...
I hope you have an even longer list of things that make you happy.
pome lover
Comment Written 09-May-2019
reply by the author on 10-May-2019
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Dear pome lover, Thanks for your comments and review.
Comment from LisaMay
I agree with you on all of the items you have listed! Life is made up of so many irritations, often due to inconsiderate people. I like how in your story the irritations kept coming along like the drip, drop, drip, drop of the dripping faucet.
reply by the author on 10-May-2019
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I agree with you on all of the items you have listed! Life is made up of so many irritations, often due to inconsiderate people. I like how in your story the irritations kept coming along like the drip, drop, drip, drop of the dripping faucet.
Comment Written 09-May-2019
reply by the author on 10-May-2019
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Dear LisaMay, Thank you for your comments and review.
