Teenage Strife May Cost A Life
The struggle is real among teenagers.26 total reviews
Comment from OneKnouff
Very nicely done. Quite profound and timely. I know suicide among children and teens is # 2 cause of death. Your choice of colors and the photo add emphasis and impact to your work. And along with you I highly recommend following Bible principles. Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece. You should do well in this contest. Timothy.
reply by the author on 12-May-2019
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Very nicely done. Quite profound and timely. I know suicide among children and teens is # 2 cause of death. Your choice of colors and the photo add emphasis and impact to your work. And along with you I highly recommend following Bible principles. Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece. You should do well in this contest. Timothy.
Comment Written 12-May-2019
reply by the author on 12-May-2019
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Thank you
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A poignant write lance and we need to protect our teenagers and make sure they have lots of support as they are growing and learning, a fine nonet, I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 12-May-2019
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A poignant write lance and we need to protect our teenagers and make sure they have lots of support as they are growing and learning, a fine nonet, I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 12-May-2019
reply by the author on 12-May-2019
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Thank you
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, a serious issue, well presented in both verse and imagery - in perfect compliance with the prompt. Best of luck in the contest with this very important issue well expressed - I agree, love, understanding and hugs more relevant solutions...
reply by the author on 10-May-2019
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In my opinion, a serious issue, well presented in both verse and imagery - in perfect compliance with the prompt. Best of luck in the contest with this very important issue well expressed - I agree, love, understanding and hugs more relevant solutions...
Comment Written 10-May-2019
reply by the author on 10-May-2019
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Thank you.
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You are very welcome, Lance...Eve
Comment from Eric M McChesney
This was a very powerful write. Your tone was hardened, it was truthful and spoke volumes. As an individual who suffers, this piece hit home, life is hard and our younger generation is in dire need of guidance and of love. Great Job on penning this, best of luck to you.
reply by the author on 10-May-2019
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This was a very powerful write. Your tone was hardened, it was truthful and spoke volumes. As an individual who suffers, this piece hit home, life is hard and our younger generation is in dire need of guidance and of love. Great Job on penning this, best of luck to you.
Comment Written 10-May-2019
reply by the author on 10-May-2019
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Thank you.
Comment from Beri Bee
This is such a powerful message so cleverly written! Teenagers are sacred treasures! I love that line so much because they are not always seen that way. Thank you for the beautiful reminder.
reply by the author on 10-May-2019
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This is such a powerful message so cleverly written! Teenagers are sacred treasures! I love that line so much because they are not always seen that way. Thank you for the beautiful reminder.
Comment Written 10-May-2019
reply by the author on 10-May-2019
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Thank you for the review and kind comments.
Comment from Louise Michelle
I am so glad I'm not a teenager in these times. Yes, there's a lot that parents can do to try to keep their kids on track, but with social media, parenting is a lot harder. Nicely written. Hugs, Lou
reply by the author on 09-May-2019
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I am so glad I'm not a teenager in these times. Yes, there's a lot that parents can do to try to keep their kids on track, but with social media, parenting is a lot harder. Nicely written. Hugs, Lou
Comment Written 09-May-2019
reply by the author on 09-May-2019
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Thank you so much.
Comment from Heather Knight
I like your poem because you've decided to raise awareness of a very important topic.
Life is difficult for teenagers and they need lots of support.
Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-May-2019
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I like your poem because you've decided to raise awareness of a very important topic.
Life is difficult for teenagers and they need lots of support.
Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 09-May-2019
reply by the author on 09-May-2019
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Thank you
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
You're absolutely right about this. A different world from the one I grew up in. They are crying out for help in so many different ways and we need to pay attention to them. I appreciate you shining the light on this subject with this well written work. Well done!
reply by the author on 08-May-2019
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You're absolutely right about this. A different world from the one I grew up in. They are crying out for help in so many different ways and we need to pay attention to them. I appreciate you shining the light on this subject with this well written work. Well done!
Comment Written 08-May-2019
reply by the author on 08-May-2019
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Thank you.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Nonet about the struggles and problems teenagers have to deal with can cause them to consider suicide as a solution or even drugs can make their problems go away, right in the hand of the devil.
reply by the author on 08-May-2019
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A very well-written Nonet about the struggles and problems teenagers have to deal with can cause them to consider suicide as a solution or even drugs can make their problems go away, right in the hand of the devil.
Comment Written 08-May-2019
reply by the author on 08-May-2019
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Thank you.
Comment from Brian Taylor1
That was nice. You managed to get a soft heart felt flow before lifting the end with a strike. Great use of Bible and spiral, they meshed well. When it got smaller with every line I felt it added to the severity of the meaning. I took it as the poem itself was shrinking into it's own depression then wham! Now it's on a much higher level of serious. And your rite sir. I think they should have limits on the social network. Maybe see and feel the potential of the human soul away from the screen. Good writing.
reply by the author on 08-May-2019
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That was nice. You managed to get a soft heart felt flow before lifting the end with a strike. Great use of Bible and spiral, they meshed well. When it got smaller with every line I felt it added to the severity of the meaning. I took it as the poem itself was shrinking into it's own depression then wham! Now it's on a much higher level of serious. And your rite sir. I think they should have limits on the social network. Maybe see and feel the potential of the human soul away from the screen. Good writing.
Comment Written 07-May-2019
reply by the author on 08-May-2019
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Thank you for the review and comments.
