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Six Word Poem17 total reviews
Comment from john mallahan
Thank you! Always need an uplifting message for my world. Why the frick do we get outta bed in the morning? Gotta go. gotta go. All. the thing we need!
reply by the author on 16-May-2019
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Thank you! Always need an uplifting message for my world. Why the frick do we get outta bed in the morning? Gotta go. gotta go. All. the thing we need!
Comment Written 15-May-2019
reply by the author on 16-May-2019
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Thank you so much, John, for popping in and having a read of my short six word poem. The world needs more uplifting messages. A new tv program perhaps - Uplifting News - instead of just the negative stuff we hear about all the time.
Have a great day in your neck of the woods. ~DD
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi DD. I'm interpreting this to mean being true to self--not to get involved in anything that doesn't lead us to a satisfying place. Best of luck in the contest with this fine entry. Marilyn
reply by the author on 09-May-2019
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Hi DD. I'm interpreting this to mean being true to self--not to get involved in anything that doesn't lead us to a satisfying place. Best of luck in the contest with this fine entry. Marilyn
Comment Written 08-May-2019
reply by the author on 09-May-2019
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Marilyn, thank you for your review. Perhaps six words were not enough to express this piece. Sometimes people offer empty gestures without meaning it or go through with things at a dishonest or half-hearted level. This poem is a message to live life with full interest and honest intent. ~DD
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
In other words be who you are, not try to live above yourself. You have to be happy, so just do it. Nicely stated for the contest
reply by the author on 09-May-2019
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In other words be who you are, not try to live above yourself. You have to be happy, so just do it. Nicely stated for the contest
Comment Written 08-May-2019
reply by the author on 09-May-2019
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Hello Barb, thank you for your review. Perhaps six words were not enough to express this piece. Sometimes people offer empty gestures without meaning it or go through with things at a dishonest or half-hearted level. This poem is a message to live life with full interest and honest intent, and yes - to be happy. ~DD
Comment from Pantygynt
Well, yes, why not? It sounds like a good idea. How the devil do they manage to judge these things. The contrast between living life to the full and that this can only be achieved if one does not make empty gestures is a clever use of the two key words.
reply by the author on 09-May-2019
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Well, yes, why not? It sounds like a good idea. How the devil do they manage to judge these things. The contrast between living life to the full and that this can only be achieved if one does not make empty gestures is a clever use of the two key words.
Comment Written 08-May-2019
reply by the author on 09-May-2019
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Thanks, Jim for your review. I always smile at your struggle on short pieces - or perhaps just my play of words. ~DD
Comment from Irish Rain
What a wonderful entry for
this six word contest!
It says everything.
The picture is great too!
I wish you the best of luck!
Blessings...
reply by the author on 14-May-2019
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What a wonderful entry for
this six word contest!
It says everything.
The picture is great too!
I wish you the best of luck!
Blessings...
Comment Written 08-May-2019
reply by the author on 14-May-2019
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Thank you, Irish Rain, for taking the time to review my short poem. Your comments are much appreciated. I do apologize for the late response. ~DD
Comment from LisaMay
This sentence provides encouragement to embrace the fullness of experiencing life, with zest and energy, and not being shallow and insincere. So many people are lightweights who promise and don't deliver.
reply by the author on 14-May-2019
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This sentence provides encouragement to embrace the fullness of experiencing life, with zest and energy, and not being shallow and insincere. So many people are lightweights who promise and don't deliver.
Comment Written 08-May-2019
reply by the author on 14-May-2019
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Thank you, LisaMay, for taking the time to review my short poem. Your comments are much appreciated. You hit the nail on the head with your comments. Thank you for 'getting' it and I do apologize for the late response. ~DD
Comment from Sugarray77
DD, I loved this verse that made me feel free and vibrant. The photo helped too. Even though it is short, I could feel the energy and encouragement. well done and good luck in the contest.
Melissa
reply by the author on 14-May-2019
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DD, I loved this verse that made me feel free and vibrant. The photo helped too. Even though it is short, I could feel the energy and encouragement. well done and good luck in the contest.
Melissa
Comment Written 07-May-2019
reply by the author on 14-May-2019
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Thank you Mellissa and again, sorry for the late response. ~DD
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and quote, DD.
-I like the formatting of
your poem, and the
effective use of the six words.
-Good use of alliteration,
and a very good message
about living life to the
fullest, but be sincere about it.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 14-May-2019
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-Nice image and quote, DD.
-I like the formatting of
your poem, and the
effective use of the six words.
-Good use of alliteration,
and a very good message
about living life to the
fullest, but be sincere about it.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-May-2019
reply by the author on 14-May-2019
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Thank you again, Pam - your comments are always appreciated. Sorry for the late reply. ~DD
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You are very welcome, DD. No problem about late reply. Congrats on the win for the lune contest, too!
Comment from lyenochka
A very profound message in you six word poem, DD! Yes, so much of living can be full of "empty gestures" motions we go through without heart and without sincerity.
reply by the author on 14-May-2019
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A very profound message in you six word poem, DD! Yes, so much of living can be full of "empty gestures" motions we go through without heart and without sincerity.
Comment Written 07-May-2019
reply by the author on 14-May-2019
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Thank you, Helen, for taking the time to review my short poem. Your comments are always much appreciated. I do apologize for the late response. ~DD
Comment from misscookie
Wow!
You said it all You captured my attention from the start.
It would be nice if more people did they spend to much time doing useless things
thank you for sharing
cookie
reply by the author on 14-May-2019
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Wow!
You said it all You captured my attention from the start.
It would be nice if more people did they spend to much time doing useless things
thank you for sharing
cookie
Comment Written 07-May-2019
reply by the author on 14-May-2019
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Thank you again, MissCookies and sorry for my late reply. ~DD
