Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This stacked 5-7-5 suite, Nightmare, has the proper formatting and finds that china doll of our youth continuing to inhabit our thoughts. We all, apparently, had to deal with those randomly placed and poorly cared for broken dolls. Ghastly.

 Comment Written 08-May-2019

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reply by the author on 09-May-2019

Sorry for the late reply. I'm so glad you read my poem and reviewed it...I'm not very good at short poems with certain sllyable counts, but I thought I'd try. I appreciate you taking time to read, because I value your opinion. :)

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Night terrors are common in children and they usually grow out of it, I wish I understood dreams and nightmares better, I used to have nightmares at one time when I was much younger. Your write has great descriptions and the artwork is scary like a nightmare, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 07-May-2019

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reply by the author on 07-May-2019

Thank you. I'm not very good at 5-7-5 poems...I just thought I'd try. Thank you for reading and reviewing. :)

Comment from oliver818

Excellent

I like your poem. It flows well and seems to respect the rules required by the competition. I like the imagery you use too. Thanks for sharing and have a great day.

 Comment Written 07-May-2019

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reply by the author on 07-May-2019

Thank you for this nice review. :)