Fairy Magic
5-7-5 stacked contest7 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This stacked 5-7-5 suite, Fairy Magic, has the proper formatting and creates a brief scene of the darting fairies playing gaily in the moonlight. Nice.
reply by the author on 08-May-2019
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This stacked 5-7-5 suite, Fairy Magic, has the proper formatting and creates a brief scene of the darting fairies playing gaily in the moonlight. Nice.
Comment Written 08-May-2019
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Comment from LisaMay
Your delightful poem conjures up a most enjoyable fantasy night garden inhabited by fairies dancing in the moonlight amidst the petals of flowers.
How I would love to see that. But you have described it so well I feel like I already have!
reply by the author on 08-May-2019
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Your delightful poem conjures up a most enjoyable fantasy night garden inhabited by fairies dancing in the moonlight amidst the petals of flowers.
How I would love to see that. But you have described it so well I feel like I already have!
Comment Written 07-May-2019
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Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written stacked 5-7-5 poem about the fairies that come at night to get the flowers in their best shape and color when the sun appears they are all ready to bloom.
reply by the author on 07-May-2019
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A very well-written stacked 5-7-5 poem about the fairies that come at night to get the flowers in their best shape and color when the sun appears they are all ready to bloom.
Comment Written 07-May-2019
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Comment from oliver818
Nice poem, I enjoyed it. I like the imagery you use, it works well. I especially enjoyed the last stanza. Thanks for sharing this and have yourself a really great days. Best of luck with the competition too
reply by the author on 07-May-2019
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Nice poem, I enjoyed it. I like the imagery you use, it works well. I especially enjoyed the last stanza. Thanks for sharing this and have yourself a really great days. Best of luck with the competition too
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A sweet story of enchanting fairies in your garden, I would suggest that you make (garden) plural, (gardens) it would fit better, it's just a suggestion to help the flow, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 07-May-2019
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A sweet story of enchanting fairies in your garden, I would suggest that you make (garden) plural, (gardens) it would fit better, it's just a suggestion to help the flow, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 07-May-2019
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Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made excellent use of all your syllables and appealing imagery to paint a mesmerizing scene. I gave a 4 because of the typo--"the" for
"they."
reply by the author on 06-May-2019
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You have made excellent use of all your syllables and appealing imagery to paint a mesmerizing scene. I gave a 4 because of the typo--"the" for
"they."
Comment Written 06-May-2019
reply by the author on 06-May-2019
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Appreciate you pointing that out to me. I even read it twice over and I still missed it. Not to make excuses it is dull wintry day here and I did not have the light on. Thank you for your review.
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Appreciate you pointing that out to me. I even read it twice over and I still missed it. Not to make excuses it is dull wintry day here and I did not have the light on. Thank you for your review.
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Appreciate you pointing that out to me. I even read it twice over and I still missed it. Not to make excuses it is dull wintry day here and I did not have the light on. Thank you for your review.
Comment from MissMerri
A charming and totally appealing stack of 5-7-5's. I liked this and especially enjoyed the strong imagery. (I think you dropped a 'y' off of "they" in line four, but not positive.) The best thing about this is the pictures your well-chosen words create in the reader's mind. It was truly delightful and easy to see. Good job, and I wish you much luck in this contest. ~MM
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A charming and totally appealing stack of 5-7-5's. I liked this and especially enjoyed the strong imagery. (I think you dropped a 'y' off of "they" in line four, but not positive.) The best thing about this is the pictures your well-chosen words create in the reader's mind. It was truly delightful and easy to see. Good job, and I wish you much luck in this contest. ~MM
Comment Written 06-May-2019
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