Too Old
Too old to love.64 total reviews
Comment from LisaMay
This is a poem from the heart wanting a connection of the heart that hasn't happened yet. But one must remain optimistic if that is your dream, to have a love partner. My aunt got married at 72. I have myself been dateless for 3 years. There are other ways to love and feel loved and be cherished in your community and if the only guys around cannot see past their own insecurities and assumptions then they wouldn't have been good company anyway.
reply by the author on 06-May-2019
  |
This is a poem from the heart wanting a connection of the heart that hasn't happened yet. But one must remain optimistic if that is your dream, to have a love partner. My aunt got married at 72. I have myself been dateless for 3 years. There are other ways to love and feel loved and be cherished in your community and if the only guys around cannot see past their own insecurities and assumptions then they wouldn't have been good company anyway.
Comment Written 06-May-2019
reply by the author on 06-May-2019
-
LisaMay: thank you for reading and commenting. Linda
Comment from Ms. Snyder
Awe no that is not true. Keep going - listen there is someone out there that thinks that 70 is sexy! I want you to start to think that - it is a state of mind. You have to believe it for it to happen. Don't think of your number as a chain around your neck. Think of it as a badge of honor and a way of expressing how awesome you are as a person. This poem was magnificent! You are not too old Linda. Let your mind open the doors to the man that is right for you. Men these days will date women with confidence and conviction. You are not an old lady and the sea. You are a gifted and talented person who can communicate effectively and have the love and passion to share. Stay positive and welcome the next as a person, getting to know you and they'd be lucky to have you. It is all the perspective. Men like a chase. Make 'em chase you. They will! Cheers, Fonda
reply by the author on 06-May-2019
|
Awe no that is not true. Keep going - listen there is someone out there that thinks that 70 is sexy! I want you to start to think that - it is a state of mind. You have to believe it for it to happen. Don't think of your number as a chain around your neck. Think of it as a badge of honor and a way of expressing how awesome you are as a person. This poem was magnificent! You are not too old Linda. Let your mind open the doors to the man that is right for you. Men these days will date women with confidence and conviction. You are not an old lady and the sea. You are a gifted and talented person who can communicate effectively and have the love and passion to share. Stay positive and welcome the next as a person, getting to know you and they'd be lucky to have you. It is all the perspective. Men like a chase. Make 'em chase you. They will! Cheers, Fonda
Comment Written 06-May-2019
reply by the author on 06-May-2019
-
Ms. Snyder: I think 70 is fine. I look about 55 but move much slower than that. It is some others who have the age thing all wrong! Thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts with me. Linda
Comment from djsaxon
Linda, the turn down is so wrong. Tell these tiny 'mind' Lotharios to go park their vanity somewhere else. The poem is very good, and so honest. Alone but not lonely is the key - DJ
reply by the author on 06-May-2019
|
Linda, the turn down is so wrong. Tell these tiny 'mind' Lotharios to go park their vanity somewhere else. The poem is very good, and so honest. Alone but not lonely is the key - DJ
Comment Written 05-May-2019
reply by the author on 06-May-2019
-
Thank you for reading and commenting. Linda
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Too Old", is an extremely well-written , but sad piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. This is definitely a six. You KEEP WRITING and I'll KEEP READING. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 06-May-2019
 |
"Too Old", is an extremely well-written , but sad piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. This is definitely a six. You KEEP WRITING and I'll KEEP READING. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 05-May-2019
reply by the author on 06-May-2019
-
Thank you, duchessofdrumborg, for reading, commenting and for thinking this piece worthy of six stars. Linda
-
Linda, you're more than welcome. It was certainly worthy of six stars.
Take care and God bless,
the Duchess xxoo
Comment from Beri Bee
It is a lovely poem, Linda. The world is full of a** *****. (For myself, I gave up even trying to date about 4 years ago. I was melancholy at first, but now I am so happy without the aggravation!) Just know that it's them, not you! Well done with this melancholy piece!
reply by the author on 06-May-2019
|
It is a lovely poem, Linda. The world is full of a** *****. (For myself, I gave up even trying to date about 4 years ago. I was melancholy at first, but now I am so happy without the aggravation!) Just know that it's them, not you! Well done with this melancholy piece!
Comment Written 05-May-2019
reply by the author on 06-May-2019
-
Thank you, Beri Bee, for reading and sharing your thoughts with me. Linda
-
You are welcome! (Also, I don't usually talk about my experience... I want you to know that in no way am I suggesting you give up!) It ain't over yet!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
I can relate to this well-written, emotional poem. At 67, I feel so washed up on some says. I hear people several years YOUNGER than I am referred to a ELDERLY. I like the glimmer of hope at the end.
reply by the author on 06-May-2019
|
I can relate to this well-written, emotional poem. At 67, I feel so washed up on some says. I hear people several years YOUNGER than I am referred to a ELDERLY. I like the glimmer of hope at the end.
Comment Written 05-May-2019
reply by the author on 06-May-2019
-
Janice: keep busy so that you feel necessary and useful. It works for me. Thanks for reading and commenting. Linda
Comment from QC Poet
Sadly, It's part of the changes in generations and cultures altogether.
Seniors need to be and are always learning and becoming great resources of information during the times they lived to survive, and their efforts to provide family, friends, historical record.
reply by the author on 06-May-2019
|
Sadly, It's part of the changes in generations and cultures altogether.
Seniors need to be and are always learning and becoming great resources of information during the times they lived to survive, and their efforts to provide family, friends, historical record.
Comment Written 05-May-2019
reply by the author on 06-May-2019
-
Thank you for reading and commenting. Linda
Comment from Mastery
Hi, Linda. OMG. What nerve of somebody to claim 71 is too old to date. For what? a twenty-year-old? perhaps. A big age Difference yes....but too old, no. Somebody was blowing smoke at you, my friend. I am 80 and still do not consider it "old" Older--yes. LOL Bless you, my friend.
reply by the author on 06-May-2019
|
Hi, Linda. OMG. What nerve of somebody to claim 71 is too old to date. For what? a twenty-year-old? perhaps. A big age Difference yes....but too old, no. Somebody was blowing smoke at you, my friend. I am 80 and still do not consider it "old" Older--yes. LOL Bless you, my friend.
Comment Written 05-May-2019
reply by the author on 06-May-2019
-
Thank you, Mastery. Linda
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
This is really good and very well thought out. You've summed up what sometimes happens in the times and stages of old age. It also sounds like a sad lament because old age is inevitable if we live long enough. I love what you've done with this and how well it flows from start to finish. Great job Linda and well done!
reply by the author on 06-May-2019
|
This is really good and very well thought out. You've summed up what sometimes happens in the times and stages of old age. It also sounds like a sad lament because old age is inevitable if we live long enough. I love what you've done with this and how well it flows from start to finish. Great job Linda and well done!
Comment Written 05-May-2019
reply by the author on 06-May-2019
-
Your comments are a blessing to me. Thank you. Linda
Comment from phil nelson
This is an excellent cry in the wilderness(I hope by now you have found a date who respects your beauty) --you have captured the fear and some of the helplessness to growing old--a very enjoyable poem nonetheless and the picture is perfect for the sentiment!
All the Best!
Phil
reply by the author on 06-May-2019
|
This is an excellent cry in the wilderness(I hope by now you have found a date who respects your beauty) --you have captured the fear and some of the helplessness to growing old--a very enjoyable poem nonetheless and the picture is perfect for the sentiment!
All the Best!
Phil
Comment Written 05-May-2019
reply by the author on 06-May-2019
-
Thank you for your gracious comments, Phil. Linda
