Too Old
Too old to love.64 total reviews
Comment from estory
This poem was colorful in images, and I liked the use of rhythm here as a musical element. This part: "Blond turns to brown turns to grey turns to white' was the best part for me. That was really strong and imaginative, that's what contemporary poetry is all about: finding new ways to make music out of language. And it worked so well to underscore your theme of a fading beauty, a disconnected attraction. estory
reply by the author on 08-May-2019
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This poem was colorful in images, and I liked the use of rhythm here as a musical element. This part: "Blond turns to brown turns to grey turns to white' was the best part for me. That was really strong and imaginative, that's what contemporary poetry is all about: finding new ways to make music out of language. And it worked so well to underscore your theme of a fading beauty, a disconnected attraction. estory
Comment Written 08-May-2019
reply by the author on 08-May-2019
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Thank you, estory, for reading and commenting. Linda
Comment from Ulla
My goodness, what a load of rubbish is that. 65 and 68! Soon they will be 71. Pay them no heed. Age is all in the mind and with a positive attitude and good health that is what matters. I'm 67 later this month. I don't like it, but I still feel and act like a much younger person. I loved your poem. All best. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 08-May-2019
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My goodness, what a load of rubbish is that. 65 and 68! Soon they will be 71. Pay them no heed. Age is all in the mind and with a positive attitude and good health that is what matters. I'm 67 later this month. I don't like it, but I still feel and act like a much younger person. I loved your poem. All best. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 08-May-2019
reply by the author on 08-May-2019
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Ulla: thank you for understand, reading and commenting. Linda
Comment from Hayley Zemontas
First of all I want to applaud your honesty in sharing this poem and the story behind it with us, for it is obviously very personal. I'm sure many others will be able to empathise with how those comments made you feel. I think that's absolutely ridiculous- nobody is too old to be loved nor ineligible for it and I am sure without a doubt you have so much to offer a person. Surely there are fellow lonely people out there who are in their 70's too? I think you should never lose hope, if this is what you desire then continue to seek it! I love that you expressed your emotions about this issue within a poem and can relate to this as this is one reason that I write poetry as well. It helps us to process difficult emotions and connect with like minded souls. I thought your words were beautiful, heart wrenching and emotive and will resound with others. Beautiful x
reply by the author on 08-May-2019
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First of all I want to applaud your honesty in sharing this poem and the story behind it with us, for it is obviously very personal. I'm sure many others will be able to empathise with how those comments made you feel. I think that's absolutely ridiculous- nobody is too old to be loved nor ineligible for it and I am sure without a doubt you have so much to offer a person. Surely there are fellow lonely people out there who are in their 70's too? I think you should never lose hope, if this is what you desire then continue to seek it! I love that you expressed your emotions about this issue within a poem and can relate to this as this is one reason that I write poetry as well. It helps us to process difficult emotions and connect with like minded souls. I thought your words were beautiful, heart wrenching and emotive and will resound with others. Beautiful x
Comment Written 08-May-2019
reply by the author on 08-May-2019
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Thank you for your beautiful review, 6 stars, reading and sharing your thoughts with me.! Linda
Comment from TPAC
True bottom line conveyed in this particular write, finding ourselves to walk alone, delighting hell no doubt, desiring the inner suffering, in my opinion of this work.
reply by the author on 08-May-2019
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True bottom line conveyed in this particular write, finding ourselves to walk alone, delighting hell no doubt, desiring the inner suffering, in my opinion of this work.
Comment Written 08-May-2019
reply by the author on 08-May-2019
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Thank you for reading and commenting, TPAC. Linda
Comment from dmt1967
'what use () the soul? (is)
This poem is very relatable but, you are never too old lol. I like the unformatted style this poem was written in as well. The picture fits the poem. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 10-May-2019
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'what use () the soul? (is)
This poem is very relatable but, you are never too old lol. I like the unformatted style this poem was written in as well. The picture fits the poem. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 08-May-2019
reply by the author on 10-May-2019
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dmt: thank you for reading and sharing your insights. Linda
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Too Old, is a mindset we all have to set aside and push through to feel each new day is a way to enjoy things better and better.
reply by the author on 11-May-2019
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This poem, Too Old, is a mindset we all have to set aside and push through to feel each new day is a way to enjoy things better and better.
Comment Written 08-May-2019
reply by the author on 11-May-2019
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Bill: it isn't my mindset, of being too old, but, apparently some have it. Thanks for reading. Linda
Comment from Lance S. Loria
You're only as old as you feel. I'm 68 and get turned down all the time. LoL. Very nice and well written poem about aging. No edits or adjustments necessary.
reply by the author on 11-May-2019
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You're only as old as you feel. I'm 68 and get turned down all the time. LoL. Very nice and well written poem about aging. No edits or adjustments necessary.
Comment Written 07-May-2019
reply by the author on 11-May-2019
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Thank you, Lance, for reading and commenting. Linda
Comment from Tpa
it flows beautifully as I read through it and the punctuation (or purposeful lack of) keeps me at the rhythm that I know the author intended for me. I also pay particular attention to the presentation of it. Since there are usually fewer letters and words than a story or article, I place great importance on the spacing, placement and actual choice of letters and words. Presentation is everything to me with a 5.0.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2020
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it flows beautifully as I read through it and the punctuation (or purposeful lack of) keeps me at the rhythm that I know the author intended for me. I also pay particular attention to the presentation of it. Since there are usually fewer letters and words than a story or article, I place great importance on the spacing, placement and actual choice of letters and words. Presentation is everything to me with a 5.0.
Comment Written 07-May-2019
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2020
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Thank you, Tpa. Linda
Comment from Dutchie
Such a wonderful poem, Linda and I can relate to. Our hair turns gray, that's the beginning. We don't feel old mentally, but we notice we can not do what we used to do... Beloved ones die... But deep inside we're still the same. And than I think:The time that rests I want quality of life and do what I still can do. Enjoy my life with the family and friends I still have.
Wonderful poem. Fia
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2020
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Such a wonderful poem, Linda and I can relate to. Our hair turns gray, that's the beginning. We don't feel old mentally, but we notice we can not do what we used to do... Beloved ones die... But deep inside we're still the same. And than I think:The time that rests I want quality of life and do what I still can do. Enjoy my life with the family and friends I still have.
Wonderful poem. Fia
Comment Written 07-May-2019
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2020
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Thank you, Fia, for reading, sharing your thoughts and grading this so highly with six stars. Linda
Comment from rjuselius
this is a beautifully crafted piece of poetry dear Linda! I am sometimes very amazed by how people grow old but continue business as usual. I just watched a document about a 86 year ld man who was blinded 40 years earlier and he received the mensa honorary member without any tests because he had done so many things that improved his living in a secluded area.
thank you for sharing!
blessings and a super squeeze!
Rebekka x
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2020
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this is a beautifully crafted piece of poetry dear Linda! I am sometimes very amazed by how people grow old but continue business as usual. I just watched a document about a 86 year ld man who was blinded 40 years earlier and he received the mensa honorary member without any tests because he had done so many things that improved his living in a secluded area.
thank you for sharing!
blessings and a super squeeze!
Rebekka x
Comment Written 07-May-2019
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2020
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Thank you so much, Rebekka, for reading, sharing your thoughts and grading this piece with six stars. Linda
