Comment from Pearl Edwards

Excellent

You are practising the art of the short form poem, Wendy. Well penned Lune poem. Anticipating a breakfast catch, they are optimistic fishermen. Love the colours in the artwork.
cheers,
valda

 Comment Written 07-May-2019

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reply by the author on 07-May-2019

Thanks for the second review Valda. Since I tend to write long, it is good for me to try these short ones from time to time to force me to rein in my Tome Tendencies. -

Comment from trimple

Excellent

Good evening, Wendy

Your little Lune Poem leaves your reader much to ponder and visualise.

Being a nature lover, I'd like to think the trout ate first :)

much love

tracey

 Comment Written 05-May-2019

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reply by the author on 06-May-2019

Thanks for the review Tracey and I am also betting on the trout. Pretty sure there is a meandering mosquito in its future. - Wendy

reply by trimple on 06-May-2019

:)

Comment from JudyE

Excellent

It's not much past dawn here but we're behind a bit of a hill so the gold is only just starting to hit the top of the trees. I believe trout are notoriously hard to catch. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 05-May-2019

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reply by the author on 06-May-2019

Thanks for the good luck wish and the review. I'm all in for the trout. - Wendy

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

This is an interesting Lune poem, Wendy. I like the catchy theme. I expect the fisherman may get the fish, unless somehow the trout can escape the hook with the bait. Marilyn

 Comment Written 05-May-2019

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reply by the author on 06-May-2019

Good morning Marilyn, I stumbled on the theme as I sat on the front porch pondering what I was going to prepare the guests for breakfast. As dawn arrived with its attendant bugs. I thought I wouldn't have to cook at all if they were birds or fish . . . .

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written lune poem about an early morning fishing expedition. It is hard to decide who are the successful fishermen the fish that gets away with the bait of the men who catch the fish.

 Comment Written 05-May-2019

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reply by the author on 05-May-2019

Thanks for the review, Sandra. I'm betting on the fish. - Wendy

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

I love trout! I enjoyed your words and you described an early morning scene here of the fishermen up at the crack of dawn, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 05-May-2019

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reply by the author on 05-May-2019

Thanks for taking a peek Dolly. I'm trying to get back in the saddle here and these short ones keep me focused. I'm glad you liked it. - Wendy