Shifting
It is not about me anymore.25 total reviews
Comment from judiverse
A lovely thought in six words. You made every word count. I hope new dads will see the baby as bringing as shift in their lives--maybe being there to help with its care. A great idea, but to me it depends on the picture, though, for meaning. Best of luck in the contest. judi
reply by the author on 05-May-2019
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A lovely thought in six words. You made every word count. I hope new dads will see the baby as bringing as shift in their lives--maybe being there to help with its care. A great idea, but to me it depends on the picture, though, for meaning. Best of luck in the contest. judi
Comment Written 05-May-2019
reply by the author on 05-May-2019
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Thank you, Judi... I remember when our little ones came and everything changed!!! I am glad you liked it.
Melissa
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You're very welcome. Write on! judi
Comment from nancy_e_davis
What an endearing picture, Melissa. He's got the whole world in his hands. He looks like a good daddy. Yes, a new arrival changes everything and things are never the same afterward. Good Luck in the contest. Nancy:)
reply by the author on 05-May-2019
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What an endearing picture, Melissa. He's got the whole world in his hands. He looks like a good daddy. Yes, a new arrival changes everything and things are never the same afterward. Good Luck in the contest. Nancy:)
Comment Written 05-May-2019
reply by the author on 05-May-2019
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Thanks so much, Nancy. Yes, little ones change everything!!!
Melissa
Comment from Mistydawn
What a sweet poem. The picture is just as lovely. You're so right, a baby will change your entire world, the way you view things. Good luck with your contest.
reply by the author on 05-May-2019
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What a sweet poem. The picture is just as lovely. You're so right, a baby will change your entire world, the way you view things. Good luck with your contest.
Comment Written 05-May-2019
reply by the author on 05-May-2019
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Thanks so much, Misty. I am glad you liked it.
Melissa
Comment from Mrs. KT
Good Morning, Melissa!
So very true! The world dramatically shifts with the birth of a precious baby. I not only appreciate your well-chosen words but also the indentation in your presentation to signify a shift.
Thank you for sharing!
Best Wishes!
diane
reply by the author on 05-May-2019
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Good Morning, Melissa!
So very true! The world dramatically shifts with the birth of a precious baby. I not only appreciate your well-chosen words but also the indentation in your presentation to signify a shift.
Thank you for sharing!
Best Wishes!
diane
Comment Written 05-May-2019
reply by the author on 05-May-2019
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Thanks so much, Diane... you seem to be the only one to recognized the deliberate shift.. Very clever, my friend!
Melissa
Comment from Ms. Snyder
This is absolutely the truth of what my world was. When my son arrived it was not about anything other than my son. And this is a beautiful photo. I do not know Melissa if he will ever get to the point where he will experience this. I hope he does, but I know that he early on weathered a blow in his personal life that has made it difficult for him to imagine having children of his own. I pray that he finds the miracle in this 6 small word poem that speaks such large volumes and to me is worthy of every six I have ever had! I hope all is going well on your end! Cheers, Fonda
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This is absolutely the truth of what my world was. When my son arrived it was not about anything other than my son. And this is a beautiful photo. I do not know Melissa if he will ever get to the point where he will experience this. I hope he does, but I know that he early on weathered a blow in his personal life that has made it difficult for him to imagine having children of his own. I pray that he finds the miracle in this 6 small word poem that speaks such large volumes and to me is worthy of every six I have ever had! I hope all is going well on your end! Cheers, Fonda
Comment Written 05-May-2019
reply by the author on 05-May-2019
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Hello Fonda... You are such a dear to share your story with me... also the story about your son. Little ones do change our lives and we are never complete without them from that time forward. I am delighted you liked it.
Melissa
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written six-word poem about our selfish ways of living change the minute we hold a little child of our own in our arms, then our world shift and make them the number one in our world.
reply by the author on 05-May-2019
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A very well-written six-word poem about our selfish ways of living change the minute we hold a little child of our own in our arms, then our world shift and make them the number one in our world.
Comment Written 05-May-2019
reply by the author on 05-May-2019
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Thanks so much, Sandra!!
Melissa
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Omigoodness!! Love times a million trillion zillion!! What a sweet picture, and no truer words exist! Children change everything...for the better if you're doing your life right!! WONDERFUL entry, Melissa! Your writing has such star-quality. xo
reply by the author on 05-May-2019
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Omigoodness!! Love times a million trillion zillion!! What a sweet picture, and no truer words exist! Children change everything...for the better if you're doing your life right!! WONDERFUL entry, Melissa! Your writing has such star-quality. xo
Comment Written 05-May-2019
reply by the author on 05-May-2019
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Hello Rachelle. Thanks for your delightful review. I am so happy you liked it.
Melissa
Comment from Heather Knight
This is so true. Our life changes when we have children. This is a perfect poem for today. It's Mother's Day here in Spain.
Thanks so much for sharing and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 05-May-2019
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This is so true. Our life changes when we have children. This is a perfect poem for today. It's Mother's Day here in Spain.
Thanks so much for sharing and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 05-May-2019
reply by the author on 05-May-2019
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Awwww, Maria, I did not know it was Mothers Day there. I am glad to gift you this in honor of your special day! Have a lovely Sunday!!
Melissa
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Thanks. You too.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Poignant words Melissa and having children makes us much less selfish, I so agree, we think about the needs of another and it makes us more rounded as people, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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Poignant words Melissa and having children makes us much less selfish, I so agree, we think about the needs of another and it makes us more rounded as people, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 05-May-2019
reply by the author on 05-May-2019
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Thank you, Dolly, for your comments. It does seem that a parent does go through a metamorphose when they have children. I am glad you liked it.
Melissa
Comment from June Sargent
How sweet! A world of love captured in six words. Nothing more important than the birth of a child. Great artwork as well. I loved this, Melissa.
reply by the author on 05-May-2019
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How sweet! A world of love captured in six words. Nothing more important than the birth of a child. Great artwork as well. I loved this, Melissa.
Comment Written 05-May-2019
reply by the author on 05-May-2019
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Hi June. Thanks so much!
Melissa
