You Just Did, Dude.
2-4-2 Contest25 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This 2-4-2, You just Did, Dude, has the proper formatting and captures the realization that in the midst of denial, the impossible happens.
reply by the author on 08-May-2019
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This 2-4-2, You just Did, Dude, has the proper formatting and captures the realization that in the midst of denial, the impossible happens.
Comment Written 08-May-2019
reply by the author on 08-May-2019
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Thank you, Bill.
Comment from nomi338
Do not
Ever again
Say can't.
A writer worthy of the title writer, can do, as was just proven, anything he desires to do. I believe that it is called talent. I also believe, that all of the writers on this site have it, some in abundance, other growing in talent as they study, practice, take and apply the advice that is freely given, mostly in love., and there you have it. Good job.
reply by the author on 08-May-2019
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Do not
Ever again
Say can't.
A writer worthy of the title writer, can do, as was just proven, anything he desires to do. I believe that it is called talent. I also believe, that all of the writers on this site have it, some in abundance, other growing in talent as they study, practice, take and apply the advice that is freely given, mostly in love., and there you have it. Good job.
Comment Written 07-May-2019
reply by the author on 08-May-2019
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Well said, Nomi, and thanks for the review!
Comment from Bichon
It is often hard to write a proper poem with such short characters and syllables, but you have done a good job and even made me laugh whilst reading. Great poem and good luck with the contest!
reply by the author on 07-May-2019
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It is often hard to write a proper poem with such short characters and syllables, but you have done a good job and even made me laugh whilst reading. Great poem and good luck with the contest!
Comment Written 07-May-2019
reply by the author on 07-May-2019
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Thank you so much, Bichon!
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, well, you did and did it well, though short, also sweet - it definitely defines the situation well, and rhymes too - in full compliance with the prompt. Best of luck in the contest with this little gem...
reply by the author on 07-May-2019
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In my opinion, well, you did and did it well, though short, also sweet - it definitely defines the situation well, and rhymes too - in full compliance with the prompt. Best of luck in the contest with this little gem...
Comment Written 06-May-2019
reply by the author on 07-May-2019
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Thanks, Eve!
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You're so welcome, Chip, again, good luck...Eve
Comment from Reese Turner
I agree. Too short for me.
I can't compress my syllables few
To say what I really need to...
But, nice try, you met the number,
And, look like you need some slumber!
reply by the author on 06-May-2019
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I agree. Too short for me.
I can't compress my syllables few
To say what I really need to...
But, nice try, you met the number,
And, look like you need some slumber!
Comment Written 06-May-2019
reply by the author on 06-May-2019
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Thanks, Reese.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good image and
nice presentation.
-The syllable count
is good, and the rhyme
is effective, as well as
your message.
-I like the definite
nature of the first line.
-Syllables do complicate
things unless you enjoy
working with them!
-Good luck in the contest.
-I just looked at your
title again, and like the
irony, too.
reply by the author on 06-May-2019
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-Good image and
nice presentation.
-The syllable count
is good, and the rhyme
is effective, as well as
your message.
-I like the definite
nature of the first line.
-Syllables do complicate
things unless you enjoy
working with them!
-Good luck in the contest.
-I just looked at your
title again, and like the
irony, too.
Comment Written 06-May-2019
reply by the author on 06-May-2019
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Thanks, Pam!
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You are quite welcome.
Comment from Shirley McLain
Very true sentiments. It is certainly hard to do. The syllable count is correct. You did a great job and I do wish you luck in the contest. Have a great day. Shirley
reply by the author on 06-May-2019
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Very true sentiments. It is certainly hard to do. The syllable count is correct. You did a great job and I do wish you luck in the contest. Have a great day. Shirley
Comment Written 06-May-2019
reply by the author on 06-May-2019
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Thanks you, Shirley!
Comment from Rmocruz
You're right
it can turn out
so trite.
A clever valid title with an enhancing
photo-art selection.
Well crafted overall!
Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 06-May-2019
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You're right
it can turn out
so trite.
A clever valid title with an enhancing
photo-art selection.
Well crafted overall!
Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 05-May-2019
reply by the author on 06-May-2019
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Many thanks!
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You're welcome!
Comment from Debra White
Haha! I like this!
I really struggle to write such short poems. I really struggle to call them poems with syllables so few!
But, you managed. And it rhymes. And it made me laugh! Bravo ;)
Good luck in the contest. Best wishes, Debra :)
reply by the author on 06-May-2019
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Haha! I like this!
I really struggle to write such short poems. I really struggle to call them poems with syllables so few!
But, you managed. And it rhymes. And it made me laugh! Bravo ;)
Good luck in the contest. Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment Written 05-May-2019
reply by the author on 06-May-2019
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Thanks, Debra!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made excellent use of all your syllables in this clever piece that
accomplishes something that the words claim can't be done. These short
forms are very challenging--for me.
reply by the author on 06-May-2019
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You have made excellent use of all your syllables in this clever piece that
accomplishes something that the words claim can't be done. These short
forms are very challenging--for me.
Comment Written 05-May-2019
reply by the author on 06-May-2019
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Thank you, Janice!
