A Fate Uncertain (A Sonnet)
Acrostic Poem Contest Entry22 total reviews
Comment from kiwijenny
So correct me if I'm wrong...you'll go back in time to stop the guy who got a virus but it would cause you never to have been born....are you going to kill your great granddad? Yikes how sad. And don't forget to post it on YouTube...it could go viral... isn't there a cure? Go back one step further and find that
God bless...sorry I like a happy ending always have
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reply by the author on 04-May-2019
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So correct me if I'm wrong...you'll go back in time to stop the guy who got a virus but it would cause you never to have been born....are you going to kill your great granddad? Yikes how sad. And don't forget to post it on YouTube...it could go viral... isn't there a cure? Go back one step further and find that
God bless...sorry I like a happy ending always have
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Comment Written 04-May-2019
reply by the author on 04-May-2019
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Wow! What a review! Yes, she has to kill her great grandfather who concocted the virus in the first place to save her people. If he dies, the virus is never invented, she is never born but her people are alive and healthy. Sorry. Didn't mean to upset you with the ending. I sooooo appreciate your comments! Thank you so much.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a very clever write because not only do you have an acrostic here, but it is also a sonnet. I have written a few so I know they are more difficult than they look. You did a splendid job here and I enjoyed the sentiments too, I wish you luck with the contest and I wish I had a six for you, good meter and well written, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 04-May-2019
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This is a very clever write because not only do you have an acrostic here, but it is also a sonnet. I have written a few so I know they are more difficult than they look. You did a splendid job here and I enjoyed the sentiments too, I wish you luck with the contest and I wish I had a six for you, good meter and well written, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 04-May-2019
reply by the author on 04-May-2019
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Thank you so much, Dolly for this lovely review. Yes, what a challenge! I am brain dead. LOL! I appreciate your time here and your comments mean a great deal. Thanks again!
