Comment from Dawn Munro

Excellent

Oh, are rainbows really born when clouds collide? I thought that was thunder, and rainbows were reflected light on water droplets... (Don't mind me; I really don't know the facts, teach. *grin*) Your notes! :))

 Comment Written 03-May-2019

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reply by the author on 04-May-2019

You so funny.... you could be one of my 'brilliant' students (LOL!) :) ;) Thanx for the review, ma'am -- you and Miss Priss enjoy the weekend and next week -- I'm gonna try not to get too far behind again..... but I know that's something that's just not possible at this point! :) ;) Yvette

reply by Dawn Munro on 04-May-2019

I try, I really try. *smirk*

Comment from Janice Canerdy

Excellent

You have made excellent use of all your syllables in this thought-provoking piece on results. Sometimes success is the result of conflicts
resolved over time.

 Comment Written 02-May-2019

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reply by the author on 02-May-2019

Thank you for your review. ;)

Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

This is a very beautiful verse with a great photo too. I like your way of using the word.. collide.. its like they bump and poof you have a rainbow. Very fanciful.

Melissa

 Comment Written 02-May-2019

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reply by the author on 02-May-2019

Thank you for your review, Melissa. ;)

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written 2-4-2 poem about the rainbow that is a promise to man and God will keep His promise. The science of the rainbow is true as well.

 Comment Written 02-May-2019

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reply by the author on 02-May-2019

Thank you for your review, Sandra. ;)

Comment from Mrs. KT

Excellent

Hello Mystery Writer,
Bring on the clouds!
Bring on the rainbows!
Bring on more of your delightful poetry that makes the reader pause and reflect!
Thank you!
Best Wishes!
diane

 Comment Written 02-May-2019

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reply by the author on 02-May-2019

Thank you for your review, Diane. ;)

Comment from Bill Pinder

Excellent

Excellent concept and synchrony between the picture and your writing. Thanks for sharing some scientific information to broaden my information about rainbows also.
Bill

 Comment Written 02-May-2019

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reply by the author on 02-May-2019

Thank you for your review, Bill. ;)

reply by Bill Pinder on 03-May-2019

Comment from C. Gale Burnett

Excellent

So very beautiful. Love the artwork, love your author notes (you educated me), love your color scheme, font and the message conveyed. A most wonderful contest entry!

 Comment Written 02-May-2019

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reply by the author on 02-May-2019

Thank you for your review. ;)

Comment from zanya

Excellent

Yes an interesting poetic portrayal of rainbows and their origins - rainbows never cease to inspire and fascinate us - superb pic to illustrate their beauty

 Comment Written 02-May-2019

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reply by the author on 02-May-2019

Thank you for your review. ;)

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

I liked this informative 2-4-2 poem about formation and transformational state of rainbows in the sky; well said, well done. Thanks4sharing. Write2Inspire Changes4Years--DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 02-May-2019

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reply by the author on 02-May-2019

Thank you for your review. ;)

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Yes and usually a storm has occurred beforehand so that the rainbow peeps through the clouds, I enjoyed your 2-4-2 and I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 02-May-2019

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reply by the author on 02-May-2019

Thank you for your review. ;)