I Stand Forgotten
A Sad Horse19 total reviews
Comment from Dawn Munro
Okay, well, here's the thing -- a poem about a rocking horse should NOT make me sad, but this one DOES. (LOL)
Wonderful! If I was a gambling woman, I' put my bet on this poem... (Get it? The horses? = a win in the booth? LOL)
reply by the author on 11-May-2019
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Okay, well, here's the thing -- a poem about a rocking horse should NOT make me sad, but this one DOES. (LOL)
Wonderful! If I was a gambling woman, I' put my bet on this poem... (Get it? The horses? = a win in the booth? LOL)
Comment Written 11-May-2019
reply by the author on 11-May-2019
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You're so funny. I came in third. But that's okay. I had fun doing it.
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:)) It's a WONDERFUL poem, Yvonne!
Comment from artisart4u
Yep, that is the way it goes, in time you can be forgotten.
This is a good for today also, cars verses horses.
Your poem rhymes very well, font nice and the color is the color you see you look at something western.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 05-May-2019
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Yep, that is the way it goes, in time you can be forgotten.
This is a good for today also, cars verses horses.
Your poem rhymes very well, font nice and the color is the color you see you look at something western.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 05-May-2019
reply by the author on 05-May-2019
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Thank you. I'm appreciate your wonderful review.
Comment from moongirlwriter
Awwwwww, this kind of reminds me of Toy Story. All things do come to an end but those memories remain forever. This was a fun read down memory lane. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 05-May-2019
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Awwwwww, this kind of reminds me of Toy Story. All things do come to an end but those memories remain forever. This was a fun read down memory lane. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 05-May-2019
reply by the author on 05-May-2019
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I'm glad it brought you memories. Thank you.
Comment from misscookie
I love it the artwork you choose as well as your poem
Your words capture my attention from the first line to the last
You gave me my last read and smile for the night.
so thank you for sharing and have blessed night.
Cookie
reply by the author on 03-May-2019
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I love it the artwork you choose as well as your poem
Your words capture my attention from the first line to the last
You gave me my last read and smile for the night.
so thank you for sharing and have blessed night.
Cookie
Comment Written 03-May-2019
reply by the author on 03-May-2019
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Thank you so much, Miss Cookie. I'm glad I gave you a smile. I hope you have a blessed night, too.
Comment from Heather Knight
What a beautiful poem! I like the nostalgic tone and I think it's very appropriate for the subject matter.
I find abandoned toys very sad.
Thanks so much for sharing and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 03-May-2019
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What a beautiful poem! I like the nostalgic tone and I think it's very appropriate for the subject matter.
I find abandoned toys very sad.
Thanks so much for sharing and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 03-May-2019
reply by the author on 03-May-2019
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Thank YOU for reviewing.
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I love this poem told from the rocking horse's point of view. Bless its heart. That's how life is though. We as parents understand all to well your dilemma. We are the ones that raised them and they sometimes forget about us too. Perhaps we can sit on you and we can cry together. I enjoyed this fun and well written work. Well done!
reply by the author on 03-May-2019
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I love this poem told from the rocking horse's point of view. Bless its heart. That's how life is though. We as parents understand all to well your dilemma. We are the ones that raised them and they sometimes forget about us too. Perhaps we can sit on you and we can cry together. I enjoyed this fun and well written work. Well done!
Comment Written 02-May-2019
reply by the author on 03-May-2019
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Come anytime and we'll cry together. Thank you.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
I absolutely LOVE this poem. It is excellent in all respects: The rocking
horse's monologue is moving and emotional, arousing emotion in this reader; and the rhyme and meter of the couplets are sustained throughout.
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
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I absolutely LOVE this poem. It is excellent in all respects: The rocking
horse's monologue is moving and emotional, arousing emotion in this reader; and the rhyme and meter of the couplets are sustained throughout.
Comment Written 02-May-2019
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
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Thank you for this wonderful review! I really appreciate it.
Comment from June Sargent
I really enjoyed this piece! It's more than just a cute poem about a long forgotten rocking horse. As time passes many things - and people - end up being left behind. Bits and pieces of our past should be preserved. They remain an essential part of who we've become. thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
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I really enjoyed this piece! It's more than just a cute poem about a long forgotten rocking horse. As time passes many things - and people - end up being left behind. Bits and pieces of our past should be preserved. They remain an essential part of who we've become. thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 02-May-2019
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
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I think so, too. Thank you for a great review.
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello Mystery Writer,
Oh! The tail is always the first to go! At least it was for our children's rocking horses. I so appreciate personification poetry - of all subjects.
Yours flows well, and tells a fine, albeit sad story. Perhaps there is hope for the rocking horse in the form of grandchildren! :)
Well-executed!
diane
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
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Hello Mystery Writer,
Oh! The tail is always the first to go! At least it was for our children's rocking horses. I so appreciate personification poetry - of all subjects.
Yours flows well, and tells a fine, albeit sad story. Perhaps there is hope for the rocking horse in the form of grandchildren! :)
Well-executed!
diane
Comment Written 02-May-2019
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
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Let's hope so. Thank you for reviewing.
Comment from Sally Law
Ah, this was sad as it was such a sweet little horse and so fun when the child first climbed upon it. I remember my boys rocking away on this and then all of a sudden it lost it's delight. I think it gave way to the big wheel that roared down the driveway as they got older. I enjoyed your entry for the contest and I wish you well.
:+) Sally
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
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Ah, this was sad as it was such a sweet little horse and so fun when the child first climbed upon it. I remember my boys rocking away on this and then all of a sudden it lost it's delight. I think it gave way to the big wheel that roared down the driveway as they got older. I enjoyed your entry for the contest and I wish you well.
:+) Sally
Comment Written 02-May-2019
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
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Thank you, Sally. Luckily, my boys were too old by the time the Big Wheel came around
