Mother's Day
An Acrostic tribute to Moms6 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written acrostic for mother's day. Even when our mothers are not near or alive anymore, we are still thinking about them on Mother's day and the role they played in our lives we cannot forget.
reply by the author on 13-May-2019
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A very well-written acrostic for mother's day. Even when our mothers are not near or alive anymore, we are still thinking about them on Mother's day and the role they played in our lives we cannot forget.
Comment Written 12-May-2019
reply by the author on 13-May-2019
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
A tribute to mother, you thank you your mom for many reasons why you think she will always be the brightest star in your sky; well said, well done. Write to inspire, readable for years -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 11-May-2019
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A tribute to mother, you thank you your mom for many reasons why you think she will always be the brightest star in your sky; well said, well done. Write to inspire, readable for years -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 11-May-2019
reply by the author on 11-May-2019
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image and
presentation, Suzie Q.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-A very nice tribute to your mother.
-Effective use of rhyme and
lovely thoughts about her.
-I like the description in
your first two lines, and
the comparison of your
mother to the "brightest
star in the sky" at the end.
-I am sure she would
be proud of your poem.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 11-May-2019
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-Very nice image and
presentation, Suzie Q.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-A very nice tribute to your mother.
-Effective use of rhyme and
lovely thoughts about her.
-I like the description in
your first two lines, and
the comparison of your
mother to the "brightest
star in the sky" at the end.
-I am sure she would
be proud of your poem.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 11-May-2019
reply by the author on 11-May-2019
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Aww, thank you. That means alot to me. Thank you too for the good luck wish. I'll need it!
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You are very welcome and deserving.
Comment from Kamisah Karim
A beautiful poem to remember your mum by. You love your mum very much and I am sorry that she is not here anymore. She is looking out for you, I am very sure.Not everyone gets to have such a mum.You were one of those who are very blessed. Thank you for sharing.All the best in the competition.
reply by the author on 11-May-2019
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A beautiful poem to remember your mum by. You love your mum very much and I am sorry that she is not here anymore. She is looking out for you, I am very sure.Not everyone gets to have such a mum.You were one of those who are very blessed. Thank you for sharing.All the best in the competition.
Comment Written 11-May-2019
reply by the author on 11-May-2019
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Thank you! Yes I was blessed indeed! Not clear what you felt needed improvement to get 5 stars but I sure appreciate you taking time to read it.
Comment from dragonpoet
This shows that love for a mother doesn't end in death. This can describe the effect of all good mothers. Your mother has problem read it from where she is now.
Good luck and keep writing
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 11-May-2019
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This shows that love for a mother doesn't end in death. This can describe the effect of all good mothers. Your mother has problem read it from where she is now.
Good luck and keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 11-May-2019
reply by the author on 11-May-2019
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Thank you! Fortunately, my Mom knew how much I loved her do I have peace with that. Thank you again!
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No problem.
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Comment from Patty Palmer
When you are little you take your mom for granted. She's always there and you were probably her first priority. As you grow up, you start to realize how much they give up of their own lives to make your life easier. Your mom may not be with you anymore, but I believe she's looking down on you smiling because she heard her poem. God bless!
reply by the author on 11-May-2019
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When you are little you take your mom for granted. She's always there and you were probably her first priority. As you grow up, you start to realize how much they give up of their own lives to make your life easier. Your mom may not be with you anymore, but I believe she's looking down on you smiling because she heard her poem. God bless!
Comment Written 11-May-2019
reply by the author on 11-May-2019
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Aww, thank you so much. That means alot to me. God bless too!
