Chasing of the Wind.
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Comment from way2gokevs
A lovely family story that involves conflicts that originate from different family backgrounds and customs. You, tell a very well thought out and detailed account and it was well worth the read. Thanks for sharing a chapter in your book and keep writing, you have a good story to tell.
Cheers, Kev.
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
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A lovely family story that involves conflicts that originate from different family backgrounds and customs. You, tell a very well thought out and detailed account and it was well worth the read. Thanks for sharing a chapter in your book and keep writing, you have a good story to tell.
Cheers, Kev.
Comment Written 02-May-2019
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
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Dear Kev:
I appreciate your encouraging comments. I hope you will read all chapters of this novel. My best regards and wishes. Thanks.
Arun
Comment from Sandra Montanino
I got the gest of the story about the old sailor who had been treated badly all his life and doesn't want to be a burden to his son and daughter-in-law. It has really good bones. If I may, I'd like to make a few suggestions: "grandpa" is one word and "maybe" is also one word. "Whatsoever" is also one word but has evolved into "whatever." Lastly: Did you ever "feel" not felt. I am always excited when someone catches mistakes that I can correct and make my writing stronger, I hope you are okay with this.
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
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I got the gest of the story about the old sailor who had been treated badly all his life and doesn't want to be a burden to his son and daughter-in-law. It has really good bones. If I may, I'd like to make a few suggestions: "grandpa" is one word and "maybe" is also one word. "Whatsoever" is also one word but has evolved into "whatever." Lastly: Did you ever "feel" not felt. I am always excited when someone catches mistakes that I can correct and make my writing stronger, I hope you are okay with this.
Comment Written 01-May-2019
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
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Dear Sandra: I can't thank you enough for pointing out these errors. I feel bad that in spite of knowing the right way of spelling and correct words, I am making these mistakes I should edit my work better, My best regards. I hope you will read this novel from chapter one. Best regards.
Arun
