NaPoWriMo 2019
Viewing comments for Chapter 29 "The Penultimate Whitney"A poem a day - April 2019
15 total reviews
Comment from Teri7
This is another very cute Whitney poem you have penned and you are almost done with the challenge. This is very cute with very cute words. I love the art work you chose. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
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This is another very cute Whitney poem you have penned and you are almost done with the challenge. This is very cute with very cute words. I love the art work you chose. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 02-May-2019
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
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Thank you so much, Teri :) I appreciate your feedback. Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment from Heather Knight
So what will you write now, Debra? Don't tell me you're not going to miss your whitneys. I will.
The last line of this one is super fun. What better way to rhyme with numb?
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 01-May-2019
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So what will you write now, Debra? Don't tell me you're not going to miss your whitneys. I will.
The last line of this one is super fun. What better way to rhyme with numb?
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 01-May-2019
reply by the author on 01-May-2019
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Hi Maria :) Thanks for the lovely review - glad you appreciated the last line! I suppose I will miss the Whitney's, but other forms of poetry ARE available! I just need to get the Whitney rhythm out of my head and I'll have a go at something different!
Just a query...! Did you mean to award 4 stars with this review?
Best wishes as always, Debra x
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Nooo! Sorry, it was a mistake. Will fix it.
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Fixed!
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Aw, thank you! x
Comment from misscookie
The artwork you choose is perfect match for your write
It captured my attention from the start To be truthful to you I don't know what it means
Will please help an old lady out
It wasn't until I read the authors note I knew what Whitney meant
The older I live the more I learn
Cookie
reply by the author on 01-May-2019
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The artwork you choose is perfect match for your write
It captured my attention from the start To be truthful to you I don't know what it means
Will please help an old lady out
It wasn't until I read the authors note I knew what Whitney meant
The older I live the more I learn
Cookie
Comment Written 30-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 01-May-2019
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Hi Cookie :)
Penultimate means 'last but one' or 'next to last'.
Thanks for your feedback. Best wishes, Debra :)
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Thank you very much for explaining it to me.
Take care
cookie
Comment from 24chas
You can do it, Debra, we all have faith in you! Considering I reviewed these out of order, I couldn't even screw up the prophecy. :) Nice job once again, my friend.
reply by the author on 01-May-2019
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You can do it, Debra, we all have faith in you! Considering I reviewed these out of order, I couldn't even screw up the prophecy. :) Nice job once again, my friend.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 01-May-2019
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LOL! Thanks, Chas :) Best wishes, Debra
Comment from Amenian Aypotheeno
Well with the end in sight, you're tearing down the home straight! Love the rhyme in this one and final line had me grinning like a cheshire cat, you hum and do the octave scales so very well that I am sure that the last one will be the icing on the cake or the tape on the finish line!
reply by the author on 01-May-2019
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Well with the end in sight, you're tearing down the home straight! Love the rhyme in this one and final line had me grinning like a cheshire cat, you hum and do the octave scales so very well that I am sure that the last one will be the icing on the cake or the tape on the finish line!
Comment Written 30-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 01-May-2019
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Cheers Dale! Thanks for your encouragement and support. I appreciate it :) Best wishes, Debra
Comment from Bill Schott
This Whitney, The Penultimate Whitney, seems to be drawing on the very last of your resources to get it up and running. Can there be enough left for one more?
reply by the author on 01-May-2019
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This Whitney, The Penultimate Whitney, seems to be drawing on the very last of your resources to get it up and running. Can there be enough left for one more?
Comment Written 30-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 01-May-2019
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Hi Bill :) Thank you for your feedback! Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment from Sally Law
Dare I even try the Whitney? You are queen of Whitney poetry! I crown you now!! I am working on the Nonet and Duotrain right now. Those two styles come very naturally for me.
All my best and compliments,
Sally xo
reply by the author on 01-May-2019
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Dare I even try the Whitney? You are queen of Whitney poetry! I crown you now!! I am working on the Nonet and Duotrain right now. Those two styles come very naturally for me.
All my best and compliments,
Sally xo
Comment Written 30-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 01-May-2019
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Hi Sal :) I haven't heard of a duotrain before... I'm intrigued! Thanks for your lovely feedback as always, best wishes, Debra :) x
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Come on now, Debra!! You're this close, you can end with something even MORE sizzling than "dum-de-dum-de-dum-de-dum"!!! This did give a good laugh though, I have to say. xo
reply by the author on 01-May-2019
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Come on now, Debra!! You're this close, you can end with something even MORE sizzling than "dum-de-dum-de-dum-de-dum"!!! This did give a good laugh though, I have to say. xo
Comment Written 30-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 01-May-2019
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LOL! Thanks, Rachelle :) I really appreciate your feedback as always. Best wishes, Debra :)
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My pleasure.
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Debra. Your choice of the Whitney has been perfect for the NaPoWriMo challenge. I like this one promising "finish ahead." It signals that we've accomplished our goal. Marilyn
reply by the author on 01-May-2019
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Hi Debra. Your choice of the Whitney has been perfect for the NaPoWriMo challenge. I like this one promising "finish ahead." It signals that we've accomplished our goal. Marilyn
Comment Written 30-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 01-May-2019
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Hi Marilyn :) Thank you so much for your kind and encouraging feedback over the month, I appreciate it :) Best wishes, Debra
Comment from Kamisah Karim
This looks fun.I would like to try my hands on it too. There is no weight in this poem, just merely for the fun of writing it..I wish to learn the art of writing short poem.It is easy to get carried away in writing, especially a person like me. I shall try it, definitely...for fun like what you did Debra.I am forty going to fifty.Have 7 boys and a proud grandma on the 20th April to a baby boy...You have a beautiful family...
reply by the author on 01-May-2019
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This looks fun.I would like to try my hands on it too. There is no weight in this poem, just merely for the fun of writing it..I wish to learn the art of writing short poem.It is easy to get carried away in writing, especially a person like me. I shall try it, definitely...for fun like what you did Debra.I am forty going to fifty.Have 7 boys and a proud grandma on the 20th April to a baby boy...You have a beautiful family...
Comment Written 30-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 01-May-2019
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Hello Kamisah :) Thank you so much for your lovely comments. Congratulations on your newest arrival to the family! Best wishes, Debra :)
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Thank you Debra for your good wishes. My grandson is a blessing, bringing smiles to all at home...
