The Pose Reconstructed
you'll like this, I hope37 total reviews
Comment from Janet Foor
I've come to be a fan of your short, succinct lines. I often reade them a second time to see if I missed anything.
Great poetic devices throughout.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 05-May-2019
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I've come to be a fan of your short, succinct lines. I often reade them a second time to see if I missed anything.
Great poetic devices throughout.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 01-May-2019
reply by the author on 05-May-2019
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That's very nice of you to say. Thank you. Doug
Comment from Tpa
When reading poetry, it flows beautifully as I read through it and the punctuation (or purposeful lack of) keeps me at the rhythm that I know the author intended for me. I also pay particular attention to the presentation of it. Since there are usually fewer letters and words than a story or article, I place great importance on the spacing, placement and actual choice of letters and words. Presentation is everything to me with a 5.0.
reply by the author on 05-May-2019
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When reading poetry, it flows beautifully as I read through it and the punctuation (or purposeful lack of) keeps me at the rhythm that I know the author intended for me. I also pay particular attention to the presentation of it. Since there are usually fewer letters and words than a story or article, I place great importance on the spacing, placement and actual choice of letters and words. Presentation is everything to me with a 5.0.
Comment Written 01-May-2019
reply by the author on 05-May-2019
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Thank you. And for your attentive reading.
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello Victortouche,
What I appreciate about your poetic offering is that it is open to interpretation regarding its message. I also appreciate the paucity of words, yet it flows very well. I read it twice...and once aloud... Very creative and interesting!
Thank you!
diane
reply by the author on 05-May-2019
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Hello Victortouche,
What I appreciate about your poetic offering is that it is open to interpretation regarding its message. I also appreciate the paucity of words, yet it flows very well. I read it twice...and once aloud... Very creative and interesting!
Thank you!
diane
Comment Written 01-May-2019
reply by the author on 05-May-2019
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Thank you, Diane. You always seem to retain an open and inquisitive mind. I appreciate this. Doug
Comment from jdrhye
I like this cryptic and abstract poem. It leaves the reader open to their own interpretation. The imagery is that of acrobatic love sort of reminds me of different birds mating rituals in order to attract the female. Some are very theatrical and practiced. enjoyed the read.
j
reply by the author on 05-May-2019
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I like this cryptic and abstract poem. It leaves the reader open to their own interpretation. The imagery is that of acrobatic love sort of reminds me of different birds mating rituals in order to attract the female. Some are very theatrical and practiced. enjoyed the read.
j
Comment Written 01-May-2019
reply by the author on 05-May-2019
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Mating rituals for all species tend to be theatrical. LOL I am not kidding. Mammalian behavior alone. . .my, my, my.
Comment from Yvon
A pause a pose I just suppose this is meant for the artists ear. To stand still for long periods of time must be difficult. Unraveling love can take time. Liked it.
reply by the author on 05-May-2019
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A pause a pose I just suppose this is meant for the artists ear. To stand still for long periods of time must be difficult. Unraveling love can take time. Liked it.
Comment Written 01-May-2019
reply by the author on 05-May-2019
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Thank you.
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True
Comment from Heather Knight
I like it. Very much. I like the short lines that make the poem flow quickly.
I also like the uncomplicated language, even if the meaning is more difficult to get.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 05-May-2019
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I like it. Very much. I like the short lines that make the poem flow quickly.
I also like the uncomplicated language, even if the meaning is more difficult to get.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 01-May-2019
reply by the author on 05-May-2019
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And thank you for reading.
Comment from dragonpoet
It seems the pose is to lure the suitor in so he can try to catch her. It seems longing and lust is part of this too. The first two stanzas sound almost like meditation. Trying to plan the attack.
Keep writing
Joan
reply by the author on 05-May-2019
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It seems the pose is to lure the suitor in so he can try to catch her. It seems longing and lust is part of this too. The first two stanzas sound almost like meditation. Trying to plan the attack.
Keep writing
Joan
Comment Written 01-May-2019
reply by the author on 05-May-2019
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I like your interpretation. Thank you.
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Glad you like my interpretation. You're welcome.
Joan
Comment from Beri Bee
A learned stillness, Willful non-repose! You have so many beautiful poetic turns of phrase in this double-entendre-dripping work! A beauty to wake! Excellent work!
reply by the author on 05-May-2019
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A learned stillness, Willful non-repose! You have so many beautiful poetic turns of phrase in this double-entendre-dripping work! A beauty to wake! Excellent work!
Comment Written 01-May-2019
reply by the author on 05-May-2019
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Smiling. Thank you.
Comment from 24chas
This was a good read, Victortouche. I loved the relaxed phrasing in this one and the pleasant imagery in this piece. I thought the ending was perfectly done. Nice job.
reply by the author on 05-May-2019
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This was a good read, Victortouche. I loved the relaxed phrasing in this one and the pleasant imagery in this piece. I thought the ending was perfectly done. Nice job.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 05-May-2019
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Thank you. I appreciate it. Doug
Comment from susand3022
Hi Victor, Sometimes one must chisel away the facade on the surface and clear away the rubble to find the beauty that lies beneath. I like it. Very well said. :)
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2019
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Hi Victor, Sometimes one must chisel away the facade on the surface and clear away the rubble to find the beauty that lies beneath. I like it. Very well said. :)
Comment Written 30-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2019
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And I appreciate it. Thank you.
