Comment from HarryT

Excellent

Nice work with this tale of caution. I hate to see drivers texting or talking on their cell phones. These people are a danger to themselves and everyone else. I like the cadence of your poem and the rhyming.

 Comment Written 04-May-2019

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reply by the author on 04-May-2019

I agree. There is no reason to type and drive, the news can wait. Thanks for the insightful review, I appreciate, cheers, j

Comment from Rachelle Allen

Excellent

Oy! This one is stark and hauntingly memorable. You did a fantastic job with the rhyme, the flow, and the images. I see this as a front-runner. Good luck to you! xo

 Comment Written 03-May-2019

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reply by the author on 04-May-2019

Thanks for the thoughtful review and mojo..i

reply by Rachelle Allen on 04-May-2019

The mojo is ALLLL yours, Baby!! It's talent galore. xo

Comment from Beri Bee

Excellent

You've written a heartbreaking cautionary tale about texting and driving! Well done! Anxious to share his incredible luck is my favorite line. Everyone can relate to that feeling, so it sets up well what is about to happen. Your start and end the same is perfect!

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 28-Apr-2019

Thanks for the encouraging review. Driving and texting is a scourge on the highways. Cheers, judester

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

After the whimsical mistake, now it is just losing resources to get back success after rectification, rubbing fingers to fade the black ink is not feasible; well said, well done. Thank you for sharing. Keep Writing Inspire Changing -- DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 28-Apr-2019

Thanks for the review. It only takes a second to make a huge mistake. Cheers, judester