NaPoWriMo 2019
Viewing comments for Chapter 27 "Idling"A poem a day - April 2019
13 total reviews
Comment from frogbook
This is a great one for this cheerful little picture. It goes along perfectly with it's playful tone and lighthearted use of wording (real or not!) That's what makes an original.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2019
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This is a great one for this cheerful little picture. It goes along perfectly with it's playful tone and lighthearted use of wording (real or not!) That's what makes an original.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2019
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Hi Frogbook :) Thank you for your lovely feedback. I appreciate it! Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment from misscookie
Another cute poem my friend it reminds me of myself the only different between that guy he's relaxing on a beautiful rainbow and I'm relaxing at the computer trying to increasing my dollars and cents
and which will never happen keeping up with the message re's list
Take care cookie
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2019
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Another cute poem my friend it reminds me of myself the only different between that guy he's relaxing on a beautiful rainbow and I'm relaxing at the computer trying to increasing my dollars and cents
and which will never happen keeping up with the message re's list
Take care cookie
Comment Written 29-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2019
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Thank you, Cookie, for your lovely feedback. I appreciate it as always, best wishes, Debra :)
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Until next time
Cookie
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Whitney poem and an excellent interpretation of the pix this challenge. It seems the man just take a good rest on top of the rainbowners away from the world.
reply by the author on 01-May-2019
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A very well-written Whitney poem and an excellent interpretation of the pix this challenge. It seems the man just take a good rest on top of the rainbowners away from the world.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 01-May-2019
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Thank you, Sandra, for your feedback. I appreciate it. Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment from Amenian Aypotheeno
If you turn a rainbow upside down it becomes a colourful smile and if you tie it with string on either end then it becomes a fashionable hammock! Although bestest isn't a "real" word people do use it, especially children and my mate when he like to describe something good, he calls it "Banginest" (as in loud and proud), so this whitney works on all levels for me. Life is pretty fast, if you don't stop and take the world in around you, you might miss some treats, like this poem with rainbow with a pot of gold (in wisdom) at the end of it! Great whitney as always.
reply by the author on 01-May-2019
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If you turn a rainbow upside down it becomes a colourful smile and if you tie it with string on either end then it becomes a fashionable hammock! Although bestest isn't a "real" word people do use it, especially children and my mate when he like to describe something good, he calls it "Banginest" (as in loud and proud), so this whitney works on all levels for me. Life is pretty fast, if you don't stop and take the world in around you, you might miss some treats, like this poem with rainbow with a pot of gold (in wisdom) at the end of it! Great whitney as always.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 01-May-2019
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Hi Dale :) I love 'banginest'. I'm going to have to use it!
Thanks for the fun feedback. Best wishes, Debs :)
Comment from JudyE
That's the trouble with chores. They never seem to do themselves. I think 'bestest' should become a word. It brings great positiveness (is that a word?) in its wake.
reply by the author on 01-May-2019
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That's the trouble with chores. They never seem to do themselves. I think 'bestest' should become a word. It brings great positiveness (is that a word?) in its wake.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 01-May-2019
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Cheers, Judy :) I appreciate your feedback. Best wishes, Debra
Comment from patcelaw
Debra this is a wonderfully worded Whitney poem. You syllable count is correct and you have presented it well.
Have a blessed week.
Patricia
reply by the author on 01-May-2019
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Debra this is a wonderfully worded Whitney poem. You syllable count is correct and you have presented it well.
Have a blessed week.
Patricia
Comment Written 28-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 01-May-2019
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Thank you, Patricia :) I appreciate your feedback. Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Debra. I'm happy to see you have posted the Rainbow. As you know I'm the new facilitator for the group. We had problems with the image automatically loading with our poems. Did you have any such problems? Please let me know if it went smoothly.
This is a very nice poem and I agree that sometimes we want to go to our happy place and just bask there. Everything will take care of itself sooner or later. Great job. Marilyn
reply by the author on 01-May-2019
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Hi Debra. I'm happy to see you have posted the Rainbow. As you know I'm the new facilitator for the group. We had problems with the image automatically loading with our poems. Did you have any such problems? Please let me know if it went smoothly.
This is a very nice poem and I agree that sometimes we want to go to our happy place and just bask there. Everything will take care of itself sooner or later. Great job. Marilyn
Comment Written 28-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 01-May-2019
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Hi Marilyn :) Thanks for the feedback. The image didn't look to be there on the template, but it published with it showing!
Thanks again, best wishes, Debra :)
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That's important feedback on the image that I needed. Thank you for that. We will have two poems for May 6th--the Beatnik and Mother's Day Rose--you can submit a poem for one or both if you wish. Marilyn
Comment from Sally Law
Amen to that. I am in the "put it off" mood which is a sign I need a vacation, a long one. June is almost here. I enjoyed your Whitney and your kick-off day.
Always my best to you and yours,
Sal xo
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2019
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Amen to that. I am in the "put it off" mood which is a sign I need a vacation, a long one. June is almost here. I enjoyed your Whitney and your kick-off day.
Always my best to you and yours,
Sal xo
Comment Written 28-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2019
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Thank you, Sal! x
I could do with a proper holiday too - not just time off work, but time away from the day to day responsibilities... it's been a couple of years since our last proper holiday and I'm so ready!
Sending love, Debra x
Comment from 24chas
This was a good write, Debra. From the king of procrastination, I approve of this message. And as far as I'm concerned bestest is a word since it works in this piece. :) Good job.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2019
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This was a good write, Debra. From the king of procrastination, I approve of this message. And as far as I'm concerned bestest is a word since it works in this piece. :) Good job.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2019
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LOL! Cheers, Chas - then that's good enough for me! Thank you for your feedback. I appreciate it as always. Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment from Heather Knight
Even if bestest is not a real word, I have always loved it.
This is the perfect poem for a Sunday.
Lovely and natural-sounding as usual. Great flow.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2019
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Even if bestest is not a real word, I have always loved it.
This is the perfect poem for a Sunday.
Lovely and natural-sounding as usual. Great flow.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2019
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Thank you, Maria, for your warm and wonderful feedback. I appreciate you :) best wishes, Debra x
