angry dreams
A poem3 total reviews
Comment from WryWriter
The albatross around the neck...the unsolved case. Excellent poetry. The rhyming scheme by itself makes this poem flow. Enjoyed reading your work.
reply by the author on 01-May-2019
The albatross around the neck...the unsolved case. Excellent poetry. The rhyming scheme by itself makes this poem flow. Enjoyed reading your work.
Comment Written 01-May-2019
reply by the author on 01-May-2019
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Thanks for the review. I imagine every detective has that one case......cheers,
Comment from Carla Trinklein
Police detectives must be haunted by the ones that get away...your short poem speaks volumes. This is a wonderful entry to this contest. I wish you well!
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2019
Police detectives must be haunted by the ones that get away...your short poem speaks volumes. This is a wonderful entry to this contest. I wish you well!
Comment Written 28-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2019
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Thanks for the insightful review. Now he can devote full time on this one. Happy Sunday. Cheers, j
Comment from RodG
You have squeezed a lot of narrative into eight lines. Easy to visualize this seasoned vet on his retirement day going through cold case files. This reminds me of Michael Connelly's latest Harry Bosch novel. Harry is retiring and does the same thing. Rod
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2019
You have squeezed a lot of narrative into eight lines. Easy to visualize this seasoned vet on his retirement day going through cold case files. This reminds me of Michael Connelly's latest Harry Bosch novel. Harry is retiring and does the same thing. Rod
Comment Written 28-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2019
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Thanks for the insightful review. I don't know Harry, but I imagine this scene happening often. That one mystery that must be solved, like an emotional itch, I imagine. Cheers, judester
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My pleasure. Rod