NaPoWriMo 2019
Viewing comments for Chapter 25 "Take Away"A poem a day - April 2019
16 total reviews
Comment from misscookie
Again you captured my attention from the start.
Another mummy poem to read and I'm going to had a can of soup, this has not been a big eating day for me
I enjoy your poem as always
Cookie
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
Again you captured my attention from the start.
Another mummy poem to read and I'm going to had a can of soup, this has not been a big eating day for me
I enjoy your poem as always
Cookie
Comment Written 02-May-2019
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
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Hi Cookie :) Thank you for reading and reviewing this poem. I appreciate it - I know it will only be worth 2 cents now, so thank you again! Best wishes, Debra x
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It doesn't matter what it is worth to me it's a lovely creation beside i thought this was about expressing ourselves to each other sharing, learning and helping each other to grow. not to only read when the amount is high.. It least that how it was years ago.
Cookie
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It is definitely how it should be, but I know that I will only get a couple of reviews if I don?t promote....most people won?t bother to review if there?s no reward...sad really! X
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It's a shame t's the name of the game, that is why I don't get a big hit from people I don't know because they don't get money so I'm going to try my best to play the way they do and don't get up set
Cookie
Comment from BeasPeas
Ummm! It sounds like you had a wonderful day and topped it off with curry. Image and poem are a great combination. Hurray for Shaun coming through so you didn't have to cook dinner. Marilyn
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2019
Ummm! It sounds like you had a wonderful day and topped it off with curry. Image and poem are a great combination. Hurray for Shaun coming through so you didn't have to cook dinner. Marilyn
Comment Written 29-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2019
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Yep, he's a good 'en, mostly! Thank you for your lovely feedback, Marilyn :) Best wishes, Debra
Comment from Sally Law
What a lovely day and of course your husband sounds like a prince for taking care of dinner. I walked with my husband yesterday in a shaded park and it was lovely. He, too, prepared dinner last night. What is to become of us? I enjoyed your story via a rhyming Whitney.
All my best to you and yours,
Sal xo
reply by the author on 01-May-2019
What a lovely day and of course your husband sounds like a prince for taking care of dinner. I walked with my husband yesterday in a shaded park and it was lovely. He, too, prepared dinner last night. What is to become of us? I enjoyed your story via a rhyming Whitney.
All my best to you and yours,
Sal xo
Comment Written 29-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 01-May-2019
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Thank you, Sal :) Best wishes to you as always, Debra x
Comment from Amenian Aypotheeno
Nothing like a curry to bridge that stomach gap, although the gastronomical aftermath the following day can be leave you more tender than the meat they serve! More importantly did you get a wardrobe and did it fit?! A great whitney, that makes me wanna go to my local and have Bhuna or Sagwala with a naan... but from looking at the fridge it is gonna be chicken and veg :_(
reply by the author on 01-May-2019
Nothing like a curry to bridge that stomach gap, although the gastronomical aftermath the following day can be leave you more tender than the meat they serve! More importantly did you get a wardrobe and did it fit?! A great whitney, that makes me wanna go to my local and have Bhuna or Sagwala with a naan... but from looking at the fridge it is gonna be chicken and veg :_(
Comment Written 29-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 01-May-2019
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Hi Dale :) I think we've more or less settled on the wardrobes, but someone keeps umming and ahing...tut!
Thanks for the feedback.
Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment from JudyE
We leave for France in just over a week so are busy clearing out the freezer and fridge as we want to turn it off before we leave. We'll be gone six weeks and leaving the house empty so we thought we might as well turn the fridge off while we're away.
reply by the author on 01-May-2019
We leave for France in just over a week so are busy clearing out the freezer and fridge as we want to turn it off before we leave. We'll be gone six weeks and leaving the house empty so we thought we might as well turn the fridge off while we're away.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 01-May-2019
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Hi Judy :) Thanks for your feedback. Have a great time in France! Best wishes, Debra
Comment from rama devi
Fine flow and rhyming. The picture works great because that's just how it looks when curry is served, and waiters come around to refill the little cups with whichever item you want more of. So it fits well with the theme of being served and not having to cook. Cute rhymes.
One optional suggestion:
Special treat,(:)
I'm off the hook -
Love,
rd
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2019
Fine flow and rhyming. The picture works great because that's just how it looks when curry is served, and waiters come around to refill the little cups with whichever item you want more of. So it fits well with the theme of being served and not having to cook. Cute rhymes.
One optional suggestion:
Special treat,(:)
I'm off the hook -
Love,
rd
Comment Written 28-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2019
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Hi rd :) Thank you so much for your lovely feedback. Much appreciated, Debra :)
Comment from Rachelle Allen
That Shaun! He's a keeper! What a lovely poem for your collection to showcase a regular-special day! I love the perfect simplicity of your works, Debra. They're all wholesome and just plain delightful. I'm glad you had a later sleep in the morning and no cooking in the evening..and most of all, how much you appreciated it. You are such a sweetie. xo
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2019
That Shaun! He's a keeper! What a lovely poem for your collection to showcase a regular-special day! I love the perfect simplicity of your works, Debra. They're all wholesome and just plain delightful. I'm glad you had a later sleep in the morning and no cooking in the evening..and most of all, how much you appreciated it. You are such a sweetie. xo
Comment Written 27-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2019
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Aw, thank you, Rachelle :) He is a keeper...he has much to put up with LOL. Thanks for your kind encouragement as always, love Debra :) x
Comment from Teri7
This is a very nice rhymed Whitney poem you have penned. It seemed like you have a really wonderful and happy day. Great descriptive words and lovely imagery from the art work you used. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2019
This is a very nice rhymed Whitney poem you have penned. It seemed like you have a really wonderful and happy day. Great descriptive words and lovely imagery from the art work you used. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 27-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2019
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Hi Teri :) Thank you for your lovely feedback. I appreciate it. Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment from Heather Knight
I love curry, but it's not as easy to find here as it's in England. We have Indian restaurants, just not as many.
Another lovely Whitney. Only three to go!
Thanks for keeping us entertained.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2019
I love curry, but it's not as easy to find here as it's in England. We have Indian restaurants, just not as many.
Another lovely Whitney. Only three to go!
Thanks for keeping us entertained.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2019
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Hi Maria :) We are luck to have such a great Indian restaurant close by - and it's a bonus that they do a takeaway service too! Shaun proposed to me at the Aagrah many years ago - it's my favourite place to eat :D
Best wishes, Debra :)
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Aww! You know proposing is not a thing here in Spain? Shame.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
It's nice to have a take away after a lovely day out. It does finish the day off nicely and it sounds as if you had a wonderful day walking with your husband. Well done, Debra, another lovely poem. :) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2019
It's nice to have a take away after a lovely day out. It does finish the day off nicely and it sounds as if you had a wonderful day walking with your husband. Well done, Debra, another lovely poem. :) Sandra xx
Comment Written 27-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2019
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Thank you, Sandra :) It's not often we have a takeaway, so it's a real treat when we do! The best part... there's some left over to reheat for later today! Best wishes, Debra :) x