The Convict Train
Viewing comments for Chapter 18 "Calm before the Storm"Levi escorts a train full of dangerous convicts
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Comment from Randa Dayle
Very nice chapter. I hope you continue to share your stories with us. I can't wait until June 2019 to see the extra helpings of stories you are going to give us!
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2019
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Very nice chapter. I hope you continue to share your stories with us. I can't wait until June 2019 to see the extra helpings of stories you are going to give us!
Comment Written 27-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2019
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Thank you very much for your kind review. I will retire in about sixty-two days now. I have some fear in retiring, but once I know the system is working, I'll be fine. Writing has been a great experience, I wish I could meet more people who write stories.
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You are welcome. I am writing a Young Adult fantasy..I am on chapter 13 it's been quite a learning experience. You are welcomed to look it up and read if you so choose! May you enjoy your retirement1
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Randa, I will look forward to reading your chapters. It is interesting how some stories take on a life of their own, as you write. I wish you all the best. Keep on writing.
Comment from nancy_e_davis
they were tide-up [tied-up] in a small bedroom at the back of the house.
I spotted this one spag. Also, I think it might help if you would tell the number of convicts on the train in that header above, Larry.
Alvin Marks sees Bo Meadows as an evil man. He will be a weak link in the outlaw band and cause just enough trouble for Levi and his brothers to gain back any control they might lose on this journey. Badger and Casper will probably be the wild cards. What ever happens I will be there with you as you tell your story of the Convict Train. Nancy:)
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2019
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they were tide-up [tied-up] in a small bedroom at the back of the house.
I spotted this one spag. Also, I think it might help if you would tell the number of convicts on the train in that header above, Larry.
Alvin Marks sees Bo Meadows as an evil man. He will be a weak link in the outlaw band and cause just enough trouble for Levi and his brothers to gain back any control they might lose on this journey. Badger and Casper will probably be the wild cards. What ever happens I will be there with you as you tell your story of the Convict Train. Nancy:)
Comment Written 27-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2019
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Thank you Nancy for your wonderful review. I have considered multiple endings for this story. I'm just not sure which one I will end up with. I do know that I will be retiring in sixty-two days now. I must admit there is a certain amount of fear in retiring, but once I know the system is working I am sure things will be fine. I wish I could meet more people who write stories, but you have always been a source of great encouragement. Thank you for that.
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This is a good place to meet people and get noticed. When you have more time get to know some of the Authors on here. They will be very helpful and they are a great bunch of people. I think you know I am a fan. LOL
