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9 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
What a fun write, Trisha -- and who amoung us doesn't wish for these damn cheeks to stop drooping... Seriously!! ;) ;) LOL! I would only suggest on that line:
to a I'm sorry night
you use something more like:
to an 'I'm Sorry' night
Just found a bit of a stumble there, but it could be my blonde hair, too! ;) :) LOL! :) Thanx for the chuckles here, ma'am!! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2019
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What a fun write, Trisha -- and who amoung us doesn't wish for these damn cheeks to stop drooping... Seriously!! ;) ;) LOL! I would only suggest on that line:
to a I'm sorry night
you use something more like:
to an 'I'm Sorry' night
Just found a bit of a stumble there, but it could be my blonde hair, too! ;) :) LOL! :) Thanx for the chuckles here, ma'am!! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 29-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2019
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Thank you, you?re welcome!
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written fun poem about aging which doesn't mean we don't need to have fun. Get someone to go on a date drink some wine and eat stinky cheese and join the band with a rock and roll dance.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2019
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A very well-written fun poem about aging which doesn't mean we don't need to have fun. Get someone to go on a date drink some wine and eat stinky cheese and join the band with a rock and roll dance.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2019
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Thank you Sandra for your kind review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Pearl Edwards
I can really relate to this one Trisha, you look in the mirror and wonder who the hell is that. Good luck with the 'night club divine' (LOL)
just one edit -Dancing we'll go, to a I'm sorry night club divine - to me I'm sorry is needed in this line.
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2019
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I can really relate to this one Trisha, you look in the mirror and wonder who the hell is that. Good luck with the 'night club divine' (LOL)
just one edit -Dancing we'll go, to a I'm sorry night club divine - to me I'm sorry is needed in this line.
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 28-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2019
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Nit fixed, thanks for your kind review
Hugs Trish
Comment from Rmocruz
This is a well written mono rhyme, well rhymed and humorous.
You are dealing with aging with attitude, that's great.
Your first line is quite funny. The cartoon art compliments
your written word.
A pleasant read.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2019
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This is a well written mono rhyme, well rhymed and humorous.
You are dealing with aging with attitude, that's great.
Your first line is quite funny. The cartoon art compliments
your written word.
A pleasant read.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2019
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Thanks for your positive review
Hugs, Trisha
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You're welcome Trisha, my pleasure.
Peace, Rich
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Happy Sunday, Rich!
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Too you as well!
Comment from 24chas
This was a fun read, Bucketlist. I really liked the flow of it and especially the message in it. Great job. One small nit: Dancing we'll go, to a night club devine (divine)
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2019
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This was a fun read, Bucketlist. I really liked the flow of it and especially the message in it. Great job. One small nit: Dancing we'll go, to a night club devine (divine)
Comment Written 27-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2019
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Thanks for giving me nits! The nit has gone now, yuck! We used to call hair lice ?Nits?
Thanks for a positive review!
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Heather Knight
Both your poem and artwork are hilarious.
Our body ages, but we stay young at heart.
I think there's a typo: you wrote devine instead of divine.
Thanks so much for sharing.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2019
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Both your poem and artwork are hilarious.
Our body ages, but we stay young at heart.
I think there's a typo: you wrote devine instead of divine.
Thanks so much for sharing.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2019
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I?m so glad you enjoyed my poem. Yes, the nit has been fixed, abd
thanks for your positive review
Hugs Trisha
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Staying young at heart is the best way to live Trisha! Your poem is uplifting and whilst you have life you have positivity! Best wishes, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2019
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Staying young at heart is the best way to live Trisha! Your poem is uplifting and whilst you have life you have positivity! Best wishes, love Dolly x
Comment Written 27-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2019
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Thank you Dolly for your kind review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Nicely done monorhyme, love the idea of dancing all the ones you mentioned, but then that shows my age. OOPS. But I love to shimmy and plan to do so to the old rock and roll till He comes
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2019
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Nicely done monorhyme, love the idea of dancing all the ones you mentioned, but then that shows my age. OOPS. But I love to shimmy and plan to do so to the old rock and roll till He comes
Comment Written 27-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2019
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Good for you. I think many women on FS 70 years old and over can relate to my poem!
Thanksfor your positive review
Hugs!
Comment from Beri Bee
Oh, this is charming, fun, and relatable! Great imagery here! I can picture the little dog so easily! Dancing is such a beautiful thing to do, and a wonderful metaphor for living life well!
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2019
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Oh, this is charming, fun, and relatable! Great imagery here! I can picture the little dog so easily! Dancing is such a beautiful thing to do, and a wonderful metaphor for living life well!
Comment Written 27-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2019
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A great review thank you!
