NaPoWriMo 2019
Viewing comments for Chapter 24 "Ode to Food"National Poetry Writing Month
12 total reviews
Comment from Treischel
Yes, I've noticed how food is usually in your poetry, tempered with exercise as well. This was quite a rambling Free Style that covered the gamut of thought. I think it was a fine Ode.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2019
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Yes, I've noticed how food is usually in your poetry, tempered with exercise as well. This was quite a rambling Free Style that covered the gamut of thought. I think it was a fine Ode.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2019
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Thank you :)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written ode to food. Food is important in out lives it keeps us strong and alive, athough I do not always like fast foods because it most of the time make me feel sick.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2019
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A very well-written ode to food. Food is important in out lives it keeps us strong and alive, athough I do not always like fast foods because it most of the time make me feel sick.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2019
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Nobody wants to be sick. Thank you. Hope your weekend is going great :)
Comment from bichonfrisegirl
As a self-declared "foodie", I have to give you six stars for this delightfully enthusiastic rah-rah poem!
Brilliant to have a cheerleader's "Gimme an F, gimme an O, etc." ... luv it!
Once again, dear Alicia, you have stepped outside of the box and have come up with something unique, yet so YOU!
Food is a wonderful thing, and we are soOOO lucky to have an abundance of it to choose from. Fantastic job on this write! Now give me something good to eat. :)
Hugs,
Connie
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2019
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As a self-declared "foodie", I have to give you six stars for this delightfully enthusiastic rah-rah poem!
Brilliant to have a cheerleader's "Gimme an F, gimme an O, etc." ... luv it!
Once again, dear Alicia, you have stepped outside of the box and have come up with something unique, yet so YOU!
Food is a wonderful thing, and we are soOOO lucky to have an abundance of it to choose from. Fantastic job on this write! Now give me something good to eat. :)
Hugs,
Connie
Comment Written 27-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2019
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Hi Connie! You're the best. Thank you. Hearts & hugs, Alicia :)
Comment from ~Dovey
Hi Alicia -
You did a great job on your ode to food. I just see one little typo:
Obsessed - you just have an extra s in there.
Final stretch for NaPo... keep up the great work!
Kim
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2019
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Hi Alicia -
You did a great job on your ode to food. I just see one little typo:
Obsessed - you just have an extra s in there.
Final stretch for NaPo... keep up the great work!
Kim
Comment Written 27-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2019
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Hi Kim! Thank you. I'm make the edit change. Hearts & hugs, Alicia
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Alicia. Loved your poem because I'm a "foodie." I love food, but consciously keep my weight down to a nice comfortable poundage. Too much is no good.
This is a well written piece that's humorous, but contains good advice, too. Enjoy but in moderation and try all kinds of foods, cooked all different ways.
Favorite lines:
"Tasty foods are not a weakness
And can bring us out of bleakness"
So true. We need to treat ourselves sometimes.
Marilyn
reply by the author on 09-May-2019
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Hi Alicia. Loved your poem because I'm a "foodie." I love food, but consciously keep my weight down to a nice comfortable poundage. Too much is no good.
This is a well written piece that's humorous, but contains good advice, too. Enjoy but in moderation and try all kinds of foods, cooked all different ways.
Favorite lines:
"Tasty foods are not a weakness
And can bring us out of bleakness"
So true. We need to treat ourselves sometimes.
Marilyn
Comment Written 26-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 09-May-2019
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Thank you :)
Jazzy Vegetarian's a PBS Show that you probably know about already, but just in case not here's a link: https://jazzyvegetarian.com/
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Hi Alicia. Thank you for that link and thinking of me. My meals are very simple vegetarian, mostly roasted veggies and soups. I don't cook complicated dishes anymore. I used to cook all the Italian dishes as my husband was first gen-Italian. I do like my desserts, though. Just go out and have limited sweets or I'd overdose on them. LOL! Marilyn
Comment from Joan E.
Thank you for your good advice about food--especially more of the raw variety! I liked your rhymes and your cheers and above all your reminder to enjoy eating--one of the easiest pleasures in life. Big smiles- Joan
reply by the author on 09-May-2019
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Thank you for your good advice about food--especially more of the raw variety! I liked your rhymes and your cheers and above all your reminder to enjoy eating--one of the easiest pleasures in life. Big smiles- Joan
Comment Written 26-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 09-May-2019
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Hi Joan. You're nice. Thank you. Hugs, Alicia :)
Comment from heavenempress
Hi, excellent poetry and very attractive. I liked the colourful presentation and I guess the food you cook is the best and appetizing. You applied a unique and creative style of descriptive. Rare gift hey! All the best.
reply by the author on 09-May-2019
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Hi, excellent poetry and very attractive. I liked the colourful presentation and I guess the food you cook is the best and appetizing. You applied a unique and creative style of descriptive. Rare gift hey! All the best.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 09-May-2019
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Hi! You're very kind. Thank you :)
Comment from royowen
It makes me hungry just thinking about it. Even with just two like there is in our house, cooking can be a bind, but this artwork is lovely, the fours are amazing, and it looks so healthy. Well done Alicia, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 09-May-2019
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It makes me hungry just thinking about it. Even with just two like there is in our house, cooking can be a bind, but this artwork is lovely, the fours are amazing, and it looks so healthy. Well done Alicia, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 26-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 09-May-2019
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Hi Roy. Thank you. Hearts & hugs, Alicia :)
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Always a pleasure
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This is a fantastic, delicious, nutritious and healthy ode to food, from need, use, benefits, preparation, like, love and passion for food all worded deliciously; well said, well done. Thank you for sharing. Keep Writing Inspire Changing -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 09-May-2019
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This is a fantastic, delicious, nutritious and healthy ode to food, from need, use, benefits, preparation, like, love and passion for food all worded deliciously; well said, well done. Thank you for sharing. Keep Writing Inspire Changing -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 26-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 09-May-2019
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Hi! You're very kind. Thank you. Hugs, Alicia :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I loved this Alicia! This is a lot of fun and of course food is close to all our hearts! We love food glorious food, I loved this part of the poem:
Food is auspicious, if you want it to be
Food is nutritious, if you want it to be
Gimme an "F"
Gimme an "O"
Gimme another "O"
Gimme a "D"
What does that spell?
FOOD...
Boil it
Steam it
Don't always fry it
Sautee your food
Stirfry it too
Bake it
Broil it
Whatever you decided to do
Enjoy eating your food
Because food's great for you.
Love Dolly x
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2019
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I loved this Alicia! This is a lot of fun and of course food is close to all our hearts! We love food glorious food, I loved this part of the poem:
Food is auspicious, if you want it to be
Food is nutritious, if you want it to be
Gimme an "F"
Gimme an "O"
Gimme another "O"
Gimme a "D"
What does that spell?
FOOD...
Boil it
Steam it
Don't always fry it
Sautee your food
Stirfry it too
Bake it
Broil it
Whatever you decided to do
Enjoy eating your food
Because food's great for you.
Love Dolly x
Comment Written 26-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2019
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Hi Dolly! You're the best. Thank you. Have a great weekend. God bless you :)
