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Summer Showgirls

An Even the Odds Entry

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Comment from Beri Bee
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This is absolutely fantastic! You've done an amazing job with the instructions! your title and chosen art, together, put it over the top! Best luck with the contest!

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2019

reply by the author on 26-Apr-2019
    Thank you so much for taking the time to read and share your encouraging comments!
Comment from Mark D. R.
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you perfectly satisfied the requirements for your seasonal verse

you touched on all my images for the warmer weather - thanks

liked:
rose
lilac
butterfly

one can almost smell the flower's scent

I too like Cleo's artwork

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2019

reply by the author on 26-Apr-2019
    Thank you for dropping by to visit my garden. Your insights are much appreciated.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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How show girls in Nature is beautiful and blissful and why summer is invited for enjoying the colours, sound and movement; well said, well done. Thank you for sharing. Keep Writing Inspire Changing -- DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2019

reply by the author on 26-Apr-2019
    Thank you for your uplifting comments.
Comment from robyn corum
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Dear Mystery Poet,

What a pretty picture of summer! With the pretty lilac bushes scenting the garden air and butterflies flitting around us. What could make a prettier picture!?? This is fun and sweet and meets all the criteria! Good luck in the voting!

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2019

reply by the author on 26-Apr-2019
    Thank you for dropping for a visit in my garden. Appreciate your kind comments.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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A great use of this form tinged with a sense of nature and a warm and ambient description of the butterfly floating in the breeze, a joyous read, love Dolly x

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 Comment Written 26-Apr-2019

reply by the author on 26-Apr-2019
    Thanks, Dolly, for dropping by to visit my garden!
Comment from dragonpoet
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I like the images the words invoke of Spring flowers and what they attract.
The picture is apt though they aren't roses.

According to the rules the first and last words are supposed to be synonyms.

Good luck and keep writing

dragonpoet

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 Comment Written 26-Apr-2019

reply by the author on 26-Apr-2019
    Thank you for the heads up on the first and last words being synonyms. I totally missed that. I've revised the piece. As for the picture - that's the purple lilac bush who won by attracting the butterfly with her scent. Just having a little fun here imagining my flowers vying for attention. Looking forward to my roses, irises, lilacs, peonies, poppies and lilies to pop this summer! Thank for dropping by to read and review.
reply by dragonpoet on 26-Apr-2019
    You're welcome. I can understand why the lilacs one. They do have a strong and appealing scent.

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