Standing On A Beach
A person standing on edge of the topwater line.6 total reviews
Comment from Joan E.
I enjoyed your description of the sensation of walking on water. Thank you for adding the parallel artwork. Best wishes in the Flash Fiction contest- Joan
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2019
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I enjoyed your description of the sensation of walking on water. Thank you for adding the parallel artwork. Best wishes in the Flash Fiction contest- Joan
Comment Written 28-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2019
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Thank you! :)
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
That would indeed be some amazing feat. Perhaps even of Biblical proportions. lol
I have to say though that where this falls down is in term of actual story. not much really goes on. I get it's only 75 words but there's no conflict or drama and identifying a start/middle/end.
All the best
GMG
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2019
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Hi there,
That would indeed be some amazing feat. Perhaps even of Biblical proportions. lol
I have to say though that where this falls down is in term of actual story. not much really goes on. I get it's only 75 words but there's no conflict or drama and identifying a start/middle/end.
All the best
GMG
Comment Written 26-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2019
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Thank you!
Comment from Beri Bee
This reminds me of Being There! You've written a mystery thriller in 75 words! Congratulations! Excellent work! Best of luck with the Flash Fiction contest!
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2019
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This reminds me of Being There! You've written a mystery thriller in 75 words! Congratulations! Excellent work! Best of luck with the Flash Fiction contest!
Comment Written 26-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2019
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Thank you!
Comment from shaffer40
Walking on water. That would make you a perfect person. Just kidding. I thought this was interesting, created some vivid images. And it's well written. Good imagination.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2019
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Walking on water. That would make you a perfect person. Just kidding. I thought this was interesting, created some vivid images. And it's well written. Good imagination.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2019
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Thank you! I am so happy that you like my story!
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
The story bases true facts, taletelling is believable, there is someone who could walk across the sea water and never drown; some event we cannot show as proof always; we simply believe; well said, well done. Thank you for sharing. Keep Writing Inspire Changing -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2019
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The story bases true facts, taletelling is believable, there is someone who could walk across the sea water and never drown; some event we cannot show as proof always; we simply believe; well said, well done. Thank you for sharing. Keep Writing Inspire Changing -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 25-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2019
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Thank you! I am so happy you enjoyed my story! :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fascinating incident you imagined and made me think it real here! I wish you luck with the contest, it would be amazing to walk on water! He he he, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2019
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A fascinating incident you imagined and made me think it real here! I wish you luck with the contest, it would be amazing to walk on water! He he he, love Dolly x
Comment Written 25-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2019
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Thank you! I am so happy that you enjoyed my story.
