Geoff's Book Of Poultry
Viewing comments for Chapter 17 "Resisting Arrest"My Book Of Funny Poems and Stories.
20 total reviews
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
This is funny! You have a creative poem that plays on words so well. The picture, the poem, everything is perfect. Love how you made me laugh with 17 syllables!
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2020
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This is funny! You have a creative poem that plays on words so well. The picture, the poem, everything is perfect. Love how you made me laugh with 17 syllables!
Comment Written 26-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2020
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Thanks Michael not sure we have met. I forget where I got this, glad you liked it.
Comment from Pantygynt
Oh yes! Here we have a very clever pun indeed. I like it. And you chose the perfect photo to go with it, This guy will resist anything and everything forever, by the looks of him.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2020
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Oh yes! Here we have a very clever pun indeed. I like it. And you chose the perfect photo to go with it, This guy will resist anything and everything forever, by the looks of him.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2020
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I think it might be a she actually. Thanks for coming by. I forget where I got this. I love it!
Comment from Cynthia Adams1
This is so very cute and clever...I am still chuckling as I write this. From your title, I had expected a true-crime story. :)
Imagine my delight at finding this adorable baby, with this very witty caption. Bravo! Don't see how it could be better.
If six stars had been available, I'd have gladly given it. I will remember this poem.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2020
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This is so very cute and clever...I am still chuckling as I write this. From your title, I had expected a true-crime story. :)
Imagine my delight at finding this adorable baby, with this very witty caption. Bravo! Don't see how it could be better.
If six stars had been available, I'd have gladly given it. I will remember this poem.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2020
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No worries thanks for coming by. I forget where I got this always loved it.
Comment from JudyE
Haha, this is very clever and what a gorgeous baby photo! I'm sure that little face could get away with blue murder. I wrote my first 5-7-5 just a few days ago too. Good luck with this.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2019
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Haha, this is very clever and what a gorgeous baby photo! I'm sure that little face could get away with blue murder. I wrote my first 5-7-5 just a few days ago too. Good luck with this.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2019
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Thanks very much. I mistakenly thought Haku but Roy Owens reminded me Haku is for Nature or animals or something.
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I made the same mistake. I write very little poetry.
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Always glad to meet m9ore that are not exclusively poets as I am not. Also a Deaf now musician/composer but I could not afford to be in Toms Fan Music group as well.
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I didn't know there was a music group here as well. We are both going deaf now. Getting old isn't for sissies, is it? And I might have said that before. Repeating oneself is another failing. :)
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Yeah Fabstory, Fanart and I forget the name of the music one but all separate and all costing a fortune to be a part of.
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Yeah Fabstory, Fanart and I forget the name of the music one but all separate and all costing a fortune to be a part of.
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Yeah Fabstory, Fanart and I forget the name of the music one but all separate and all costing a fortune to be a part of.
Comment from Joan E.
Oh, my--I did not expect your "nap" theme! I relished your wordplay with "a rest" and the cute picture. You have a knack for the 5-7-5 form and should create more of them. Giggles- Joan
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2019
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Oh, my--I did not expect your "nap" theme! I relished your wordplay with "a rest" and the cute picture. You have a knack for the 5-7-5 form and should create more of them. Giggles- Joan
Comment Written 29-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2019
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Yeah well the photo has been around for years. Some even think it might have been me but not so. I had to re-work the original tag and make additions and changes to create the 5-7-5. Thanks for coming along.
Comment from Beri Bee
This is absolutely a perfect poem! I LOVE IT AND THE PIC! If I could vote for it I would! Best of luck! I hope you win! Is this precious child in your family?
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2019
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This is absolutely a perfect poem! I LOVE IT AND THE PIC! If I could vote for it I would! Best of luck! I hope you win! Is this precious child in your family?
Comment Written 28-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2019
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Thought I just responded to your review. Thanks much appreciated. The photo has been around for years I had to re-work the caption and add my own inclusions for the 5-7-5. Judging should be done and Voting opened soon. We still don't know who the "committee" is hehe.Also running my wife's old account (Tootsie55)that was closed for various reasons, one more change to her "Our Trips" book coming with a full book review with funny money
Comment from Ben Colder
LOL. Love this. Your wording is right on Bro. He's a cutie. They have a mind of their own when it comes to getting a nap. Thanks for sharing. It made my day.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2019
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LOL. Love this. Your wording is right on Bro. He's a cutie. They have a mind of their own when it comes to getting a nap. Thanks for sharing. It made my day.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2019
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Thanks Bro. Old pic I thought it was a girl and some thought it was me as a youngster..been around a long time. Had to re-work the title to create the 5-7-5.
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
I think it is considered just that and the picture is perfect. I told my friend I'd babysit her twin that are like 8 months old. They were good last time I babysat but I'm sure they are teething now. Good thing I got a couple weeks to prepare
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2019
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I think it is considered just that and the picture is perfect. I told my friend I'd babysit her twin that are like 8 months old. They were good last time I babysat but I'm sure they are teething now. Good thing I got a couple weeks to prepare
Comment Written 26-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2019
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Teething...not happy chappies then. Thanks for the lovely review.
Comment from Ulla
Awe, Geoff, that is a lovely 5-7-5 poem. For a first try you've done extremely well. The baby is adoring and your words go so well with it. What a great entry for the contest. Good luck. All the best. Ulla:))
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2019
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Awe, Geoff, that is a lovely 5-7-5 poem. For a first try you've done extremely well. The baby is adoring and your words go so well with it. What a great entry for the contest. Good luck. All the best. Ulla:))
Comment Written 26-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2019
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Thanks Ulla. The photo has been around for ages. Some think it might have been me back then but alas not.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written humorous 5-7-5 poem. The young babies often refuse to take a nap when mom wants them to sleep for a while to do her daily tasks.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2019
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A very well-written humorous 5-7-5 poem. The young babies often refuse to take a nap when mom wants them to sleep for a while to do her daily tasks.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2019
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Thanks Sis. This picture had been around for a while. Some even thought it might have been me as a little fella, not so. I had to alter and change and add to the script to create the 5-7-5. Glad you enjoyed it.
