my Loving Lord
Feelings of a Chris3 total reviews
Comment from LisaMay
Your poem delivers your own personal experience of being a Christian and the support and love you derive from this heartfelt relationship. A simple poem delivered with strength of belief.
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Your poem delivers your own personal experience of being a Christian and the support and love you derive from this heartfelt relationship. A simple poem delivered with strength of belief.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2019
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
Too true, the life of a Christian is not easy, but it's not supposed to be. I'll not forget the Christians in China, lining the roads to cheer those taken to prison for their faith, suffering for Jesus. They see it as an honor. I wish I were half as brave. Really well done. Hope you do well in the contest. Rox
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Too true, the life of a Christian is not easy, but it's not supposed to be. I'll not forget the Christians in China, lining the roads to cheer those taken to prison for their faith, suffering for Jesus. They see it as an honor. I wish I were half as brave. Really well done. Hope you do well in the contest. Rox
Comment Written 24-Apr-2019
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A few suggestions to improve the meter for you:
Line 4
'Is watching me'
Line 8
'and this I know'
Line 9
'A Christian life'
Line 14
'Sometimes I slide'
Good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2019
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A few suggestions to improve the meter for you:
Line 4
'Is watching me'
Line 8
'and this I know'
Line 9
'A Christian life'
Line 14
'Sometimes I slide'
Good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 24-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2019
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You're right, your corrections gave it a better flow.
I appreciate your suggestions as well as the five stars.
Coming from you they are a great honor.
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Glad to be of help, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
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Glad to be of help, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
