Love Spell
Wind, sun and moon send me love2 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A unique offering for the contest. I would suggest, perhaps, that you remove some of the punctuation as it appears more of a distraction in this limited format... the line breaks are enough pause. Your syllable count is good and I enjoyed the poem - good luck in the contest.
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A unique offering for the contest. I would suggest, perhaps, that you remove some of the punctuation as it appears more of a distraction in this limited format... the line breaks are enough pause. Your syllable count is good and I enjoyed the poem - good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2019
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Love is one of those magical spells that we often have no control over, we fall head over heels and before we know it the dye is cast Willie, a fine write, love Dolly x
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Love is one of those magical spells that we often have no control over, we fall head over heels and before we know it the dye is cast Willie, a fine write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 24-Apr-2019
