A Book of ... Freeverse (Vol.2)
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Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Bicpen
From what I see in graphic picture. He better be dead.
Ah, you have a good way to get my attention.
Gert
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2020
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Hello Bicpen
From what I see in graphic picture. He better be dead.
Ah, you have a good way to get my attention.
Gert
Comment Written 30-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2020
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Well he sure is just a little private joke this one that was all ...
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Hello Bicpen
read your reply I take from you said "Well he sure is just a little private joke."
Gert
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Maybe the enemy, or friend, I never know who he is, but you say he is dead, and if, he must be in hell; a live dedication; well said, well done. Thank you for sharing. Keep Writing Inspire Changing -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2019
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Maybe the enemy, or friend, I never know who he is, but you say he is dead, and if, he must be in hell; a live dedication; well said, well done. Thank you for sharing. Keep Writing Inspire Changing -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 24-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2019
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Excellent ... much appreciated
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
The people he abused probably feel like that about him and he did not live long enough to be made accountable to the things he'd done which is a real shame, a poignant write, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
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The people he abused probably feel like that about him and he did not live long enough to be made accountable to the things he'd done which is a real shame, a poignant write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 24-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
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Thanks Dolly ... it was a crying shame he could not be held accountable here on earth but the authorities were partly to blame for allowing so much freedom ... much appreciated.
Comment from moongirlwriter
He even looks evil. . .so if God's judgment is for him to rot in hell then so be it. As for me, I don't have a six for this writing and because of how it makes me respond, I wouldn't give it a six anyway. :)
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
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He even looks evil. . .so if God's judgment is for him to rot in hell then so be it. As for me, I don't have a six for this writing and because of how it makes me respond, I wouldn't give it a six anyway. :)
Comment Written 24-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
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Fair play ... I thought it was worth it but its entirely up to your own discretion ... thank you ... much appreciated.
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Comment from jlsavell
Yes, if only I had a six!!! Lol. Actually the pronunciation is different. And you had me wanting to change my not just my pen name but my whole name!!! You rascal.
Besides I am not quite that ugly and I don't smoke.
Jlsavell
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
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Yes, if only I had a six!!! Lol. Actually the pronunciation is different. And you had me wanting to change my not just my pen name but my whole name!!! You rascal.
Besides I am not quite that ugly and I don't smoke.
Jlsavell
Comment Written 24-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
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well ... I hope im not that ugly and I do smoke though the cigars are normally only once a year at New Year. lol. thought youd like it and appreciate it ... thanks kindly.
Comment from Sandra Montanino
Ok, well, first of all, I really love the picture. It reminds me of an old comedian named Jimmy Durante. I am not so sure how to take the poem. The words are clear, but the exclamation point, the three dots, and the question mark are a bit of a mystery. Good job!
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
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Ok, well, first of all, I really love the picture. It reminds me of an old comedian named Jimmy Durante. I am not so sure how to take the poem. The words are clear, but the exclamation point, the three dots, and the question mark are a bit of a mystery. Good job!
Comment Written 24-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
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Excellent ... its a Picasso.
Comment from Colin John
So true mate, Dirty ------- How the hell did it get away with it I would like to know, a sad reflection and brilliantly portrayed in your poem.
Thank you for sharing. Kind regards Colin or Cheers as we say here in Britain.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
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So true mate, Dirty ------- How the hell did it get away with it I would like to know, a sad reflection and brilliantly portrayed in your poem.
Thank you for sharing. Kind regards Colin or Cheers as we say here in Britain.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
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Much appreciated my friend well it out of this world now so in my eyes he's reallly only got one place to go ...
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To true . Cheers
