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Breadcrumbs from the Heavens

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32 total reviews 
Comment from Heather Knight
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Wow! This is so beautiful... Just a few words, but you've created an incredibly powerful image.
Thanks so much for sharing and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2019

reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
    Thanx for the smile and the review, Maria! :) ;) Have a great rest of the week! :) Yvette
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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This is a quaint write Yvette and I loved delving into your imagination here and finding these falling moonbeams that guide us at night so that we don't get lost, an ambient write, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2019

reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
    Thanx for the smile and the review, Dolly -- but don't delve too deep, you might get lost in there - LOL! :) ;) Have a great rest of the week! :) Yvette
Comment from Carla Trinklein
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A beautiful tribute to the moonlight, and so fitting coming from a rocket scientist! ;) My daughter loves to go star gazing. I'm looking forward to summer when the telescope will be hauled out again. Your syllable count is spot on and your words carefully chosen for a romantic, childlike effect. Well done and best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2019

reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
    Tell her to never stop looking at those stars... they are the best reminder there is out there that there are so many things beyond ourselves! ;) ;) Thanx for dropping by on this one, Carla -- do so appreciate hearing from you, ma'am! ;) Thanx for the smile and have a great rest of the week! :) Yvette
Comment from Colin John
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Nice concept and H&G rings to mind , a nice picture to back up you 3 liner and wish you well in the contest, still a nice one to have on your portfolio if no joy in winning . Cheers Colin

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2019

reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
    Thanx for the smile and the review, Colin -- good to have you drop by on this one, sir! ;) :) Have a great rest of the week! :) Yvette
Comment from Sally Law
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Yay! I received this one. I just love the moon. I'm a star gazer. This is a fine entry for the 575 poetry contest. I love the picture you chose for your fine work. Best of luck in the contest. Sally xo

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2019

reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
    Hooray!! ;) ;) So glad you got it ... and thanx so much for the review, Lady Sal! :) :) Have a great rest of the week! :) Yvette
Comment from JudyE
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This is a sweet poem. I like the idea of moonbeams leaving a trail so they don't get lost. I've nothing to suggest and good luck in the contest. Do you know - one of these days I might even try a 5-7-5 myself! lol

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2019

reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
    I look so very forward to it, Judy -- I want a front row seat!! :) ;) Thanx for the smile and the review, ma'am! :) ;) Have a great rest of the week! :) Yvette
Comment from Mark D. R.
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Cute idea on this entry Yvette.

I would like to follow the stardust trail. Without Waze, I do get lost or confused. Your method seems workable. Good illustration too!

Mark

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2019

reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
    Thanx for the smile and the review, Mark! :) ;) Have a great rest of the week! :) Yvette
Comment from Tina Crute
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Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful! You capture our imaginations as you personify the moon who had wandered down to earth.I hope the wandering moonbeam finds his way home! The bkack and white is effective, but I can't help but imagine the colorful beam and sparkling stardust! Awesome contest entry!
Blessings, my friend!

Tina

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2019

reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
    Oh, Tina, you make me want to cry, Beautiful Lady!! :) ;) Thank you so very much for those lovely stars and wonderful comments!! :) ;) You Rock, Lady T! :) :) Yvette
reply by Tina Crute on 24-Apr-2019
    You earn the Stars!
    I just read your ranting
    poem and it was great!
    Blessings my sweet
    and talented friend!

    Lady T💗
Comment from Sandra Montanino
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I love your title and your poem. Once again you did a great job with so few words. Also, the picture you chose matches your poem so well. It's a beautiful thought.
You are a wonderful poet.

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2019

reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
    Thanx so much for your review, Sandra -- much appreciated! ;) ;) Yvette
Comment from pome lover
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how lovely! like silk rippling through fingers-
magical.
Should be in a book of poems for children. (or us grown-ups) :)
We could use some silky ripples - as opposed to wrinkles.
Really pretty poem and perfect accompanying picture.
good job.
pome lover

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2019

reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
    Oh, yeah, Katharine -- bring on the ripples...especially if they're of the caramel kind! :) ;) Thanx for the review, ma'am -- have a great week! :)
reply by pome lover on 25-Apr-2019
    you, too.
    pl