Breadcrumbs from the Heavens
Home is always there. Just follow the breadcrumbs...32 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, Breadcrumbs from the Heavens, has the right set up and gives the readers a pseudo lesson in astronomy that we may not have heard before.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2019
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This 5-7-5, Breadcrumbs from the Heavens, has the right set up and gives the readers a pseudo lesson in astronomy that we may not have heard before.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2019
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Thanx for the review, Bill -- appreciated as always. :)
Comment from Gail Denham
That's quite lovely. And creative. It opens up new thoughts about the moon, about how we view the heavens at night. Over here in Central Oregon, when we camp at one of the lakes we see a gazillion stars and the moon is vibrant.
I do like this poem.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2019
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That's quite lovely. And creative. It opens up new thoughts about the moon, about how we view the heavens at night. Over here in Central Oregon, when we camp at one of the lakes we see a gazillion stars and the moon is vibrant.
I do like this poem.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2019
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Thanx for you wonderful review on this one, Gail -- just love being out 'in the country' and being able to view the heavens without artificial light in the way!! :) ;) Yvette
Comment from June Sargent
In a few short lines you've provided a lot of food for thought. Breadcrumbs. Such simple imagery and yet so powerful a message. We should never feel lost - just follow our heart and the tiny breadcrumbs we've left behind in the course of our journey. I really enjoyed this.
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In a few short lines you've provided a lot of food for thought. Breadcrumbs. Such simple imagery and yet so powerful a message. We should never feel lost - just follow our heart and the tiny breadcrumbs we've left behind in the course of our journey. I really enjoyed this.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2019
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Good Morning, June! :) Thank you for these lovely comments, June, and, more than that, thank you for truly reading the poem and seeing meaning behind the words ... so very appreciated! :) ;) I apologize for the delayed response... as I mentioned yesterday, this end of the year is extra this year with family stuff, too! :) ;) Hope you have a wonderful week as it's finally gonna stay warm down here...so, let me know if I need to send some sunshine your way! :) ;) Take care! ;) Yvette
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
What a delightful concept.
The night sky holds such fascination as the magical sky-scape is recreated in an ever changing form each night.
I often wondered how the elements of this wonderful show re-incarnated in repetition.
Now I know-- Magic and clever forward planning. Lol.
Delightful
Blessings
Shirley
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2019
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What a delightful concept.
The night sky holds such fascination as the magical sky-scape is recreated in an ever changing form each night.
I often wondered how the elements of this wonderful show re-incarnated in repetition.
Now I know-- Magic and clever forward planning. Lol.
Delightful
Blessings
Shirley
Comment Written 26-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2019
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Good Morning, Shirley! :) Thanx for these lovely comments... you made me thrilled with your interpretation and seeing beyond just the words ... so very appreciated! :) ;) I apologize for the delayed response... this end of the year is extra this year with family stuff, too! :) ;) Hope you have a wonderful week as it's finally gonna stay warm down here...so, let me know if I need to send some sunshine your way! :) ;) Take care! ;) Yvette
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image and
presentation, Yvette.
-The syllable count is good.
-Effective us of one
continuous thought.
-The imagery is effective,
as well as the personification
of the moonbeam.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2019
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-Very nice image and
presentation, Yvette.
-The syllable count is good.
-Effective us of one
continuous thought.
-The imagery is effective,
as well as the personification
of the moonbeam.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2019
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Good Morning, Pam! :) Thanx so much for your wonderful comments, ma'am ... so very appreciated! :) ;) I apologize for the delayed response... this end of the year is extra this year with family stuff, too! :) ;) Hope you have a wonderful week as it's finally gonna stay warm down here...so, let me know if I need to send some sunshine your way! :) ;) Take care! ;) Yvette
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You are very welcome, Yvette. No problem about a delayed response. Hope everything works out okay; at least the stress of the
school year will end for you soon. Weather is erratic here, but today looks sunny for the moment. Have a good rest of your week, too.
Comment from TPAC
An interesting way to perceive this factor, breadcrumbs paving a trial back, delighting aspects of a probable home, enjoying your view of this occurrence.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2019
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An interesting way to perceive this factor, breadcrumbs paving a trial back, delighting aspects of a probable home, enjoying your view of this occurrence.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2019
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Oh, TPAC, you just managed to put a smile on my face on a Friday afternoon.... that's a tough one in these last weeks before summer - LOL!!! :) :) Thank you , thank you for those lovely stars and, especially, for your wonderful comments.... so glad you seem to have found my 'hidden meaning' in this one! ;) ;) Take good care out there and have a great weekend! ;) Yvette
Comment from Ms. Snyder
Is one of your son's starting a website? LOL? 123rf.com per chance? LOL - or were you the lucky person that couldn't find a moonbeam and stardust to accompany this beautiful 5-7-5 without all their wonky work all over it? LOL Beautiful Teacher - I swear they are getting so intrusive in their sharable artwork out there on the net huh? It is getting so dog eat dog! MRW and CQ we will need to start sharing some of our gem picture sites that we find because they are getting more and more scarce by the day! And I love Fanstorians don't get me wrong - but just to try and find a music note - OMG - it was like pay this royalty or have every name all over the note - I guess ads have to get in where they can fit in huh? I just found it funny for such a dainty poem to have the 123RF all over it... I had to make a joke, now if your sons are hosting a site, lets please get a discount!!! Seriously! Cheers, Fonda
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2019
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Is one of your son's starting a website? LOL? 123rf.com per chance? LOL - or were you the lucky person that couldn't find a moonbeam and stardust to accompany this beautiful 5-7-5 without all their wonky work all over it? LOL Beautiful Teacher - I swear they are getting so intrusive in their sharable artwork out there on the net huh? It is getting so dog eat dog! MRW and CQ we will need to start sharing some of our gem picture sites that we find because they are getting more and more scarce by the day! And I love Fanstorians don't get me wrong - but just to try and find a music note - OMG - it was like pay this royalty or have every name all over the note - I guess ads have to get in where they can fit in huh? I just found it funny for such a dainty poem to have the 123RF all over it... I had to make a joke, now if your sons are hosting a site, lets please get a discount!!! Seriously! Cheers, Fonda
Comment Written 24-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2019
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LOL! Naaaaaah, I just don't have enough damn hours in a day to worry about little details (which I usually spend lots of time getting just the right image!!!!) and it took waaaaay too long to find this one!! ;) ;) Wish I could help in that respect, but I'm afraid I have to search the large abyss of the internet for each post, too!! :) ;) Take care out there, Lady F, and thanx so very much for your support! ;) :) Yvette
Comment from damommy
I love the imagery of your words, even without the artwork. You've used so few words to pack in a lot of substance. I'll always look at moonbeams like this now.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
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I love the imagery of your words, even without the artwork. You've used so few words to pack in a lot of substance. I'll always look at moonbeams like this now.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
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Thanx for wonderful comments, Yvonne, and for carrying one of my crazy ideas with you!! ;) ;) Take good care over there! :) ;) Have a great rest of the week! :) Yvette
Comment from royowen
What a lovely way of putting this, a truly left field post, that leaves me quite intrigued, it's the sort of imagery that shakes the dust and cobwebs from the recesses of consciousness. Well done Yvette, nothing boring about you dear friend, well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
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What a lovely way of putting this, a truly left field post, that leaves me quite intrigued, it's the sort of imagery that shakes the dust and cobwebs from the recesses of consciousness. Well done Yvette, nothing boring about you dear friend, well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 24-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
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YES! :) I have achieved my goal: true left field! :) :) LOL!! Thank you so very much for these lovely comments, Roy - I really wish I could save them because you have no idea how big a smile I am wearing on my face right now!!! :) :) You be sure to have that beautiful wife of yours give you a big hug from me because I SO NEEDED this smile today!! :) :) You both take care over there! ;) :) Yvette
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Love your posts my friend
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is a great contest entry YM. Good job on the syllable count per line. Your well-chosen words create super imagery. The picture is a great pairing with your words, too. Best wishes. Jan
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
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This is a great contest entry YM. Good job on the syllable count per line. Your well-chosen words create super imagery. The picture is a great pairing with your words, too. Best wishes. Jan
Comment Written 24-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
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Thanx so much for stopping in on this one, Jan -- always enjoy hearing from you!! ;) :) Be sure to take some time looking for stardust over in your part of the world! :) ;) Have a great rest of the week! :) Yvette
