my Son
My best friend.34 total reviews
Comment from Debi Pick Marquette
Oh Willie, if I had a six I would give it to you in a minute. This is absolutely beautiful and shows such love as it made my heart so full as I read it. Lol, I was beginning to think that I was never going to find it as it is on page nine. Whoa you have so many that I wanted to stop and read, but I am kind of crunched for time. However this was so worth the search and as lovely of a son poem that I have ever read. He is indeed a "chip off the ole block," as they say and obviously the apple doesn't fall far from the tree. I'm not trying to be funny, as he not only looks like you, but he is a mini you, but all grown up and become a wonderful man. Please except my virtual six and thank you for this wonderful poem about how much your son means to you as well. Sometime when I have a chance, I will come back and read more as so many of yours looked like some of mine.
Btw, I did read your poem about God and Santa, and it was great. I recently had one called Jesus and Santa, almost on the same order. Thanks again my awesome friend!
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2022
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Oh Willie, if I had a six I would give it to you in a minute. This is absolutely beautiful and shows such love as it made my heart so full as I read it. Lol, I was beginning to think that I was never going to find it as it is on page nine. Whoa you have so many that I wanted to stop and read, but I am kind of crunched for time. However this was so worth the search and as lovely of a son poem that I have ever read. He is indeed a "chip off the ole block," as they say and obviously the apple doesn't fall far from the tree. I'm not trying to be funny, as he not only looks like you, but he is a mini you, but all grown up and become a wonderful man. Please except my virtual six and thank you for this wonderful poem about how much your son means to you as well. Sometime when I have a chance, I will come back and read more as so many of yours looked like some of mine.
Btw, I did read your poem about God and Santa, and it was great. I recently had one called Jesus and Santa, almost on the same order. Thanks again my awesome friend!
Comment Written 30-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2022
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Debi, your virtual six and very kin words are very sufficient for me.
sounds like the two of us are very blessed parents. By the way, he too was in law enforcement. 30 years with the San Diego Co. Sheriff
Dept. He out ranked me he retired as a Lt. , I retired as a Sgt. He never lets me forget it. Your good friend, Willie
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Haha! Sounds like you taught him too well! But seriously, your pride for your son is ver clear, as it should be!
Comment from Darlene Franklin
What love and pride! I could make a similar statement about my own amazing son, who over came horrible troubles early in life. I see all those awards and agree it deserves them.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2019
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What love and pride! I could make a similar statement about my own amazing son, who over came horrible troubles early in life. I see all those awards and agree it deserves them.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2019
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Thank you for your review and stars. He makes me very proud every day.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Such wonderful tribute to your son, Willie -- and a very handsome young man at that!! ;) ;) So good to read about strong father/son relationships! ;) ;) Thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2019
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Such wonderful tribute to your son, Willie -- and a very handsome young man at that!! ;) ;) So good to read about strong father/son relationships! ;) ;) Thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 08-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2019
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Thank you for your kind review and stars. He's my main man.
Comment from lyenochka
You are so blessed! So wonderful that you took time to be with and spend with your son so that you both could develop a deep connection and consider yourselves best friends.
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2019
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You are so blessed! So wonderful that you took time to be with and spend with your son so that you both could develop a deep connection and consider yourselves best friends.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2019
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Thank you for your review ans five stars. I also have three girls, I
call them sugar face, sugar pie and sugar plum. The four are the light of my life.
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Sounds like your a wonderful father and I wish you a joyful Father's Day with your beautiful kids!
Comment from kahpot
What a beautiful tribute to your son, and an excellent poem and read, very well done and congratulations on your win, very deserving****kahpot
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2019
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What a beautiful tribute to your son, and an excellent poem and read, very well done and congratulations on your win, very deserving****kahpot
Comment Written 05-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2019
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I wish every deserving father could have a son like mine. Thanks for your review and five stars.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written rhyming poem about the son you have that is not only your son but your best friend too. Maybe he is just in your imagination, that is the only place anyone can be perfect with no failures.
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2019
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A very well-written rhyming poem about the son you have that is not only your son but your best friend too. Maybe he is just in your imagination, that is the only place anyone can be perfect with no failures.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2019
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He is not just in my imagination, He makes me proud every day. Thanks for your review and five stars.
Comment from l.raven
HI Willie, I have a son and a daughter...they
are who we live for...and in a pinch...they are always there...I love your wonderful tribute to your son...very nicely written...and your picture is priceless...Love Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2019
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HI Willie, I have a son and a daughter...they
are who we live for...and in a pinch...they are always there...I love your wonderful tribute to your son...very nicely written...and your picture is priceless...Love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 01-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2019
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Aren't they a delight and treasure?
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true gifts of God...yes they are a treasure...smiling big...love xxoo
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
I really like the poem for content. I have only one son but he is a good one. I can identify with the verse. I believe all poetry should rhyme. I have written a small number of free verse but I don't much. I see free verse as a short story with small sentences. Great Job -Robert-
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2019
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I really like the poem for content. I have only one son but he is a good one. I can identify with the verse. I believe all poetry should rhyme. I have written a small number of free verse but I don't much. I see free verse as a short story with small sentences. Great Job -Robert-
Comment Written 01-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2019
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Thank you Robert. I agree, thanks for your kind review and five stars
Comment from susand3022
Hi Willlie, You're a lucky man to have such a son in your life. I always wanted to have a daughter too. I was so sure my boy was a girl that his name was just a back-up. HER name was what I called HER all through the time I was pregnant with HER! LOL, When SHE was born and they said, "Congratulations! It's a BOY! I wasn't disappointed... just confused... she was a boy! LOL
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2019
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Hi Willlie, You're a lucky man to have such a son in your life. I always wanted to have a daughter too. I was so sure my boy was a girl that his name was just a back-up. HER name was what I called HER all through the time I was pregnant with HER! LOL, When SHE was born and they said, "Congratulations! It's a BOY! I wasn't disappointed... just confused... she was a boy! LOL
Comment Written 01-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2019
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Boy or girl, they are a treasure. I'll tell you a story I have never told anyone else. Back in my day, all the old farm women thought they
could tell whether girl or boy. they told my mom she would have a girl. My grandma's first name is Orpha, my mom's middle name was Lucile. They had planned to name me Orpha Lucile. God intervened and of course I was a boy. I told my mom, If I had been
a girl and they hung that name on me, i would have been the first suicide in the family. SHHHHH, DON'T TELL ANYONE!
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I'd have been in line at the town hall to change my name at the ripe old age of 3!
Comment from tfawcus
Powerfully expressed love of a father for his son. Bonding such as this is more precious than anything and it is a great joy when the feelings are reciprocated. Few men express their feelings with such eloquence.
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2019
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Powerfully expressed love of a father for his son. Bonding such as this is more precious than anything and it is a great joy when the feelings are reciprocated. Few men express their feelings with such eloquence.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2019
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Thank you for your kind words and five stars. I also have three beautiful daughters. I have been very blessed.
