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A Fall Romance Begins

A poem in Haiku format.

3 total reviews 
Comment from harmony13
Excellent
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The author's words are soothing, creative and descriptive. The reader
was able to visualize the scene. The poem was calming and relaxing.
The artwork is perfect and compliments this poem. Thank you for the
reply you sent me for reviewing one of your poems. I am so glad
that writing on Fanstory has helped you. It is a great Community
here. Please continue to write.
Hope you're having a great day!............harmony13

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2019

Comment from Colin John
Excellent
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Hi a nice 5-7-5 to start my evening reviewing,i feel you have the right flow and essence to show exactly what you mean or what the picture shows. Good job and good luck. Kind regards Colin

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2019

Comment from Tina Crute
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

I love this! You have alliteration with the 'gentle' and 'golden', and also the 's' sound with 'winds', 'trees', 'leaves', 'kiss' , 'water's, and 'surface'. The photo is perfectly paired with your words, and the font color and backround all " belong together." Great work done in a small poem!

Blessings,

Tina

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2019