Quell the riot
a poem.3 total reviews
Comment from samantha0930
There's a very relaxing scene in this poem. It's too bad that I'm not that good at relaxing--I just get bored doing nothing. Overstimulation isn't good and you need to rest afterwards, but understimulation isn't good either.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
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There's a very relaxing scene in this poem. It's too bad that I'm not that good at relaxing--I just get bored doing nothing. Overstimulation isn't good and you need to rest afterwards, but understimulation isn't good either.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
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I agree, we must find the happy medium. Sometimes there is more going on inside my head, than what goes on around me. Thanks for the review, cheers, judester.
Comment from Sugarray77
I love this escape slanted poem. I too like to slink away when the noise gets loud and the TV only shows discordant fusses. You did a really good job on descriptive presentations in this ... well done.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2019
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I love this escape slanted poem. I too like to slink away when the noise gets loud and the TV only shows discordant fusses. You did a really good job on descriptive presentations in this ... well done.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2019
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Thanks for the encouraging review sugarray. I do love a hot bath when it all gets too much. Cheers, j
Comment from LisaMay
You have poetically described such a lovely scene of peaceful tune-out. Rhyming "riot" and "quiet" in the last stanza really brings it home as a sanctuary.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2019
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You have poetically described such a lovely scene of peaceful tune-out. Rhyming "riot" and "quiet" in the last stanza really brings it home as a sanctuary.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2019
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Like an oxymoron, riot and quiet. Thanks for the thoughtful review LisaMay. Cheers, j
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Protons, neutrons, electrons and oxymorons...
Thanks for reminding what that word is that describes opposites.
