a flash of love
a flash of news6 total reviews
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This poem tries to pinpoint the essence of everything out of our points for consideration as love of a flashing news we should go for each point like love; well said, well done. Thank you for sharing. Keep Writing Inspire Changing -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 08-May-2019
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This poem tries to pinpoint the essence of everything out of our points for consideration as love of a flashing news we should go for each point like love; well said, well done. Thank you for sharing. Keep Writing Inspire Changing -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 25-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 08-May-2019
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thank you for the time of day for your review,dr alcreator! sorry for the late reply. "your so vein" means mood or humor.
your so vein
godlucifer
Comment from Beri Bee
The repetition of words and phrases that build and change by perhaps only one word at a time reminds me of falling rain and also a computer scan. Great job on this!
reply by the author on 08-May-2019
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The repetition of words and phrases that build and change by perhaps only one word at a time reminds me of falling rain and also a computer scan. Great job on this!
Comment Written 24-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 08-May-2019
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thank you for the time of day for your review,beri bee! sorry for the late reply. "your so vein" means mood or humor.
your so vein
godlucifer
Comment from Sandra Montanino
You obviously have a very deep, creative talent. This is the kind of poem that I would read several times to get the full impact of the words and the picture you have chosen seems perfectly matched to your poem. Well done!!
reply by the author on 08-May-2019
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You obviously have a very deep, creative talent. This is the kind of poem that I would read several times to get the full impact of the words and the picture you have chosen seems perfectly matched to your poem. Well done!!
Comment Written 24-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 08-May-2019
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thank you for the time of day for your review,sandra montanino! sorry for the late reply! "your so vein" means mood or humor.
your so vein
godlucifer
Comment from 24chas
I really like this piece, Godlucifer. It was almost a mantra and then when I read it, it became more of psychedelic experience to me. Nice job of writing.
reply by the author on 08-May-2019
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I really like this piece, Godlucifer. It was almost a mantra and then when I read it, it became more of psychedelic experience to me. Nice job of writing.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 08-May-2019
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thank you for the time of day for your review,24chas! sorry for the late reply. "your so vein" means mood or humor.
your so vein
godlucifer
Comment from Holly Buss
I get that you meant the poem to be structured this way, but to other people I think this is very hard to read, much less fully grasp the meaning behind it. I like the love and the description of it, but the repetition is so hard to understand.
reply by the author on 08-May-2019
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I get that you meant the poem to be structured this way, but to other people I think this is very hard to read, much less fully grasp the meaning behind it. I like the love and the description of it, but the repetition is so hard to understand.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 08-May-2019
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thank you for the time of day for your review,holly buss! sorry for the late reply. "your so vein" means mood or humor.
your so vein
godlucifer
Comment from Cybertron1986
I like the philosophy here that achieved the spark of thought which good philosophical pieces should achieve. A bit of a tongue twister, but overall an enjoyable mind twister as well.
reply by the author on 08-May-2019
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I like the philosophy here that achieved the spark of thought which good philosophical pieces should achieve. A bit of a tongue twister, but overall an enjoyable mind twister as well.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 08-May-2019
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thank you for the time of day for your review,cybertron1986! sorry for the late reply. "your so vein" means mood or humor.
your so vein
godlucifer
