Addiction
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Comment from Debra White
Oh Maria!
You crack me up sometimes!
What a fun story....but yes, fanstory IS addictive!
I remember watching Basic Instinct when I was a teenager and that film was something else! My then-boyfriend had a real thing for Sharon Stone and when she did the crossing the leg thing, I thought he was going to pop with excitement!
Thanks for sharing the fun :)
Best wishes as always, Debra x
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2019
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Oh Maria!
You crack me up sometimes!
What a fun story....but yes, fanstory IS addictive!
I remember watching Basic Instinct when I was a teenager and that film was something else! My then-boyfriend had a real thing for Sharon Stone and when she did the crossing the leg thing, I thought he was going to pop with excitement!
Thanks for sharing the fun :)
Best wishes as always, Debra x
Comment Written 22-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2019
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I'm glad you found this entertaining.
Thanks for reading.
Big hug.
Comment from royowen
I can understand why the poor guy has just been accused by his therapist brings up the theory of being a sex addict, when he finds his therapist attractive with pink undies. The idea of being a FS Addict ascwell. Well done great little story, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2019
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I can understand why the poor guy has just been accused by his therapist brings up the theory of being a sex addict, when he finds his therapist attractive with pink undies. The idea of being a FS Addict ascwell. Well done great little story, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 22-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2019
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Thanks for reading, Roy.
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Welcome
Comment from Shirley McLain
Now that was a surprise I didn't see coming at all. I think I'm addicted also. You did a good job and I didn't see any errors to mention. Your characters are strong with good dialogue. Shirley
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2019
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Now that was a surprise I didn't see coming at all. I think I'm addicted also. You did a good job and I didn't see any errors to mention. Your characters are strong with good dialogue. Shirley
Comment Written 22-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2019
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Thanks so much or reading, Shirley.
Comment from Sugarray77
Haha... So funny, Maria. I think this is great and so appropriate for this site. I love FS and do agree with your point that it is addictive... but so fun too. Thanks for a cute read.
Melissa
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2019
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Haha... So funny, Maria. I think this is great and so appropriate for this site. I love FS and do agree with your point that it is addictive... but so fun too. Thanks for a cute read.
Melissa
Comment Written 22-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2019
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Thanks for your review, Melissa. I'm addicted too.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
He he he, are you sure it is Fanstory he is addicted to? It sounds to me that he has a sexual interest in the therapist! He he he, this is fun and I am guilty as charged, (on the Fanstory addiction that is) love Dolly x
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2019
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He he he, are you sure it is Fanstory he is addicted to? It sounds to me that he has a sexual interest in the therapist! He he he, this is fun and I am guilty as charged, (on the Fanstory addiction that is) love Dolly x
Comment Written 22-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2019
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Same here. Thanks for reading. xxx
Comment from Irish Rain
Ha ha...I don't know which is cuter, that he is a Fanstory addict, or that he is also probably a sex addict.
Poor guy...she's too pretty to help, ha ha.
Loved this, very original,
Blessings...
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2019
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Ha ha...I don't know which is cuter, that he is a Fanstory addict, or that he is also probably a sex addict.
Poor guy...she's too pretty to help, ha ha.
Loved this, very original,
Blessings...
Comment Written 22-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2019
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Thanks for reading. I'm glad I made you laugh.
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You're welcome!!
Comment from LG Wolfe
Your short stories are so good. I hope you enter this into a flash fiction contest - nice double twist at the end, I just love that. I like the drops of consistency and hints you spread throughout your work; Sharon Stone....pink undies, Dr. Garcia's sweet voice...to her beauty, to the final line of her being the latest object of desire.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2019
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Your short stories are so good. I hope you enter this into a flash fiction contest - nice double twist at the end, I just love that. I like the drops of consistency and hints you spread throughout your work; Sharon Stone....pink undies, Dr. Garcia's sweet voice...to her beauty, to the final line of her being the latest object of desire.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2019
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Thanks so much for reading.
Comment from 24chas
This was a good read, Maria. I think a lot of people here would definitely relate to this one. At least up until the hilarious ending. Great job, my friend.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2019
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This was a good read, Maria. I think a lot of people here would definitely relate to this one. At least up until the hilarious ending. Great job, my friend.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2019
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Thanks so much for reading, Charles.
Comment from jenintorre
This a great little flash fiction. I only guessed that it was fanstory right near the end and it certainly is one. Loved the Sharon Stone reference. Hilarious, my kind of humour. Love Jen. X
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2019
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This a great little flash fiction. I only guessed that it was fanstory right near the end and it certainly is one. Loved the Sharon Stone reference. Hilarious, my kind of humour. Love Jen. X
Comment Written 22-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2019
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Thanks for your review and generous rating, Jen.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
LOL! That is really not funny, because it is so true! I'm not sure what I would do if we had a week long power cut, or even a day without internet! I love how you take us off the track by mentioning sex addicts, and the ending is hilarious! Well done again, Maria. :)) Sandra xx
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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2019
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LOL! That is really not funny, because it is so true! I'm not sure what I would do if we had a week long power cut, or even a day without internet! I love how you take us off the track by mentioning sex addicts, and the ending is hilarious! Well done again, Maria. :)) Sandra xx
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Comment Written 22-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2019
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Thanks for reading, Sandra. The truth is I'm addicted too.
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I think many of us are. :((
