Addiction
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Comment from brenda faye curtis
This is a good one! Love the little Fanstory twist at the end. It's true that many people seem to be addicted to their fanstory, and in fact I don't know how some are able to post so much in such a short time.
This would have been great as a contest entry!
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2019
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This is a good one! Love the little Fanstory twist at the end. It's true that many people seem to be addicted to their fanstory, and in fact I don't know how some are able to post so much in such a short time.
This would have been great as a contest entry!
Comment Written 25-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2019
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I AM addicted! Thanks for reading.
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You're welcome, Maria!
Comment from Ulla
Hahahahaha, I love it. I don't know how I thought this would end, but fanStory was not even on my list. Oh, if your not careful, this site is addictive, isn't it? Great little story. All the best. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
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Hahahahaha, I love it. I don't know how I thought this would end, but fanStory was not even on my list. Oh, if your not careful, this site is addictive, isn't it? Great little story. All the best. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 24-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
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Thanks for reading, Ulla. Yes, it is addictive indeed.
Comment from aryr
I liked the way you threw yourself into this short story. MMM Dr. Garcia. Very well done and I am proud of your promotion. I found it interesting that you incorporated FanStory into it as well. But you did discover what he was addicted to-FanStory. And the Doctor did expose her pink undies. Well done.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
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I liked the way you threw yourself into this short story. MMM Dr. Garcia. Very well done and I am proud of your promotion. I found it interesting that you incorporated FanStory into it as well. But you did discover what he was addicted to-FanStory. And the Doctor did expose her pink undies. Well done.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
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Thanks for reading. I really enjoyed writing this one.
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A great job, you are so welcome.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written piece. O goodness, I just realize I have an addiction and are beyond helping myself getting over this. I need an urgent appointment with DR. Garcia, I am addicted to FanStory. LOL
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
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A very well-written piece. O goodness, I just realize I have an addiction and are beyond helping myself getting over this. I need an urgent appointment with DR. Garcia, I am addicted to FanStory. LOL
Comment Written 24-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
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Me too...
Thanks for reading.
Comment from Dean Kuch
Are we really, Maria?
Addicts, I mean?
Ya know, I never really thought too much about it until now.
I've gone weeks without logging in, sometimes months.
I suppose if it's something you think about everyday and can't stay away from, an addict is an apt definition.
Scary thought...
~Dean
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
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Are we really, Maria?
Addicts, I mean?
Ya know, I never really thought too much about it until now.
I've gone weeks without logging in, sometimes months.
I suppose if it's something you think about everyday and can't stay away from, an addict is an apt definition.
Scary thought...
~Dean
Comment Written 23-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
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I think I am, Dean...
Thanks for reading.
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My pleasure. :)
Comment from Alex Rosel
Here are a few thoughts you might like to consider:
'So do you think we've made any progress today?' -- This is where I'd have started this piece. I think it'll give it more impact.
'But I don't hurt anybody. It's just a hobby.' -- This is simply lovely. Full of foreboding and potential nuances. And so concisely put. :)
Ha, ha. And I love the culminating twist. I didn't see that coming. Very effective!
I enjoyed reading this. Thank you :)
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2019
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Here are a few thoughts you might like to consider:
'So do you think we've made any progress today?' -- This is where I'd have started this piece. I think it'll give it more impact.
'But I don't hurt anybody. It's just a hobby.' -- This is simply lovely. Full of foreboding and potential nuances. And so concisely put. :)
Ha, ha. And I love the culminating twist. I didn't see that coming. Very effective!
I enjoyed reading this. Thank you :)
Comment Written 23-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2019
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Thanks for reading and for your suggestion, Alex.
Comment from Teri7
Never in my wildest dreams would I have come up with a story like that and use Fanstory in it! lol This could be really true! You did a great job with the descriptive words and imagery you chose. You should have put this one in a contest. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2019
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Never in my wildest dreams would I have come up with a story like that and use Fanstory in it! lol This could be really true! You did a great job with the descriptive words and imagery you chose. You should have put this one in a contest. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 22-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2019
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Thanks for your kind review, Teri.
Comment from Gail Denham
Oh dear - I thought something else might be coming. This is a good twist. Are we all addicted? That's a good question - we do tune in every day to find out if our stories and poems have been liked, read, reviewed. oh my
Good story.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2019
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Oh dear - I thought something else might be coming. This is a good twist. Are we all addicted? That's a good question - we do tune in every day to find out if our stories and poems have been liked, read, reviewed. oh my
Good story.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2019
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I AM addicted... I admit it.
Thanks for reading.
Comment from Judy Swanson
Oh this is too funny, Dr. Garcia! Leading the reader clearly into the sex or something similar or related addiction, which is really only a passing fancy compared to the FanStory addiction. We all need our review fix - hoping for stars. And reviewing others - peering into their minds and hearts to see what lives there. Fun - and very well written.
Judy
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2019
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Oh this is too funny, Dr. Garcia! Leading the reader clearly into the sex or something similar or related addiction, which is really only a passing fancy compared to the FanStory addiction. We all need our review fix - hoping for stars. And reviewing others - peering into their minds and hearts to see what lives there. Fun - and very well written.
Judy
Comment Written 22-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2019
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I'm glad you think this is fun. Thanks for reading.
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You are welcome!
Comment from Louise Michelle
Hahaha - Gotta give you a six for this one. I was trying to guess the ending as I read, but you fooled me good.
At first I was a little concerned that he was a pedophile and had feelings for his daughters. Thank God you didn't go there!
If the shrink is any good, she'll eventually uncover his obsession with sex. Or maybe he'll do or say something to give himself away. Very entertaining, Maria. Hugs, Lou
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2019
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Hahaha - Gotta give you a six for this one. I was trying to guess the ending as I read, but you fooled me good.
At first I was a little concerned that he was a pedophile and had feelings for his daughters. Thank God you didn't go there!
If the shrink is any good, she'll eventually uncover his obsession with sex. Or maybe he'll do or say something to give himself away. Very entertaining, Maria. Hugs, Lou
Comment Written 22-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2019
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I'm glad you enjoyed this, Lou.
Thanks so much for reading and for the six stars.
