Easter eggs
Such creamy chocolaty bliss9 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh, yeah... been there, done that!! ;) ;) Guess it's a good thing I don't have little ones anymore - LOL! ;) ;) This was a wonderful and mouth-watering entry for the contest, Jen -- so glad you joined us in our pursuit of poetry yumminess! ;) ;) Yvette :)
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2019
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Oh, yeah... been there, done that!! ;) ;) Guess it's a good thing I don't have little ones anymore - LOL! ;) ;) This was a wonderful and mouth-watering entry for the contest, Jen -- so glad you joined us in our pursuit of poetry yumminess! ;) ;) Yvette :)
Comment Written 23-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2019
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Thanks for reading Yvette. X
Comment from Lance S. Loria
A good 5-7-5 syllable count throughout. Good rhyme on lines 3-6-9. I love chocolate eggs and usually buy extras for me. It saves the return trip. LoL. No edits or adjustments.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2019
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A good 5-7-5 syllable count throughout. Good rhyme on lines 3-6-9. I love chocolate eggs and usually buy extras for me. It saves the return trip. LoL. No edits or adjustments.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2019
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Many thanks Lance
Comment from Colin John
Nice picture and poem to match or vice versa , it has my vote as i did not buy any and am off now to get some after adding more words to get me over the 150 lol. Kind Regards Colin
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2019
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Nice picture and poem to match or vice versa , it has my vote as i did not buy any and am off now to get some after adding more words to get me over the 150 lol. Kind Regards Colin
Comment Written 22-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2019
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Many thanks Colin.
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Your welcome
Comment from LisaMay
Oh you naughty greedy guts! You better walk to the candy store when you buy more, to get some calorie-eating exercise. (Your behaviour is something I can relate to. I did the same myself. I am not good with temptation.)
I hope it was the easter eggs you ate, and not your 4 children!!!
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2019
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Oh you naughty greedy guts! You better walk to the candy store when you buy more, to get some calorie-eating exercise. (Your behaviour is something I can relate to. I did the same myself. I am not good with temptation.)
I hope it was the easter eggs you ate, and not your 4 children!!!
Comment Written 21-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2019
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Many thanks
Comment from Sandra Elizabeth Williams
Overindulgence does that to us sometimes. I once used all my lunch money at school one day to buy shrimps...they were so orangey and peppery... Can I tell you how I got really sick when I reached home?! Had be out of school next day with vomiting etc.
...and then you had to buy more...after all that!!
You have the required syllables and lines for this contest and I wish you the very best.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
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Overindulgence does that to us sometimes. I once used all my lunch money at school one day to buy shrimps...they were so orangey and peppery... Can I tell you how I got really sick when I reached home?! Had be out of school next day with vomiting etc.
...and then you had to buy more...after all that!!
You have the required syllables and lines for this contest and I wish you the very best.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
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Many thanks
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You're very welcome.
Comment from poetwatch
Oh that irresistible sweet tooth that mom as well as dad have the kids are crying cause they ate the eggs they had. :) Good thing there's a store near by where they can go and buy. This is a good entry for the A Suite for the Sweets 5-7-5 contest.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
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Oh that irresistible sweet tooth that mom as well as dad have the kids are crying cause they ate the eggs they had. :) Good thing there's a store near by where they can go and buy. This is a good entry for the A Suite for the Sweets 5-7-5 contest.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
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Many thanks
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
He he he, this made me smile and this is just what my boyfriend did! He ate both Easter eggs! Now we have none! This is a fun write and I enjoyed the chocolate! Love Dolly x
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
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He he he, this made me smile and this is just what my boyfriend did! He ate both Easter eggs! Now we have none! This is a fun write and I enjoyed the chocolate! Love Dolly x
Comment Written 21-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
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Thanks Dolly
Comment from 24chas
This was a good write. I really think you did what a lot of people dream of doing. The problem is the first bite, if you avoid that one, you'd wouldn't have to buy them again. :)
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
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This was a good write. I really think you did what a lot of people dream of doing. The problem is the first bite, if you avoid that one, you'd wouldn't have to buy them again. :)
Comment Written 21-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
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Thanks Chas.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Yes, this is humorous, Mystery Author. Good job with the prompt. Your lines flow smoothly with the correct syllable count per line. The picture is a great pairing with your entry. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Jan
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
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Yes, this is humorous, Mystery Author. Good job with the prompt. Your lines flow smoothly with the correct syllable count per line. The picture is a great pairing with your entry. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Jan
Comment Written 21-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
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Many thanks
