NaPoWriMo 2019
Viewing comments for Chapter 21 "Boom Meringue!"A poem a day - April 2019
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Comment from 24chas
This was a great eat, er, I mean read. That looks absolutely delicious, Debra. I'm sure your whole family enjoyed that dish. Did Molly get any of it? Great job.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
This was a great eat, er, I mean read. That looks absolutely delicious, Debra. I'm sure your whole family enjoyed that dish. Did Molly get any of it? Great job.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
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Hi Chas :) Thanks for the feedback! The BoomMeringue was beautiful... Molly didn't get a look in though LOL (mean mummy I am!)
Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
This is such a cute and clever Whitney inspired by your daughter. Kid's say the darnedest things, don't they. I hope you all have a wonderful Easter, my friend~Debbie
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
This is such a cute and clever Whitney inspired by your daughter. Kid's say the darnedest things, don't they. I hope you all have a wonderful Easter, my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 21-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
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Thank you so much, Debbie :) I hope you had a great Easter too. Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written humorous and fun Whitney. Sometimes words sound something different as what it is in reality. When we see the fun in the misconception a favorite pudding gets a new name in the family circle.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
A very well-written humorous and fun Whitney. Sometimes words sound something different as what it is in reality. When we see the fun in the misconception a favorite pudding gets a new name in the family circle.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
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Hi Sandra :) Thank you for your feedback. Best wishes, Debra
Comment from humpwhistle
A very creative and versatile dish--bird's nest and dessert all in one.
How did your daughter come up with the 'boo' part?
Anyway, Mom did a marvelous job.
Peace, Lee
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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
A very creative and versatile dish--bird's nest and dessert all in one.
How did your daughter come up with the 'boo' part?
Anyway, Mom did a marvelous job.
Peace, Lee
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Comment Written 21-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
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Cheers Lee :) I have no idea where she got the 'boo' bit, but it's stuck!
Thanks for the feedback. Best wishes, Debra
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Hahahha!! That is adorable. And my GAWD but it looks out-of-this-world scrumptious!! You Brits do things up RIGHT!!! (Is there any left?)
This should be the cover for your poem compilation: Boom Meringue and Other Family Delights.
I couldn't love it more. xo
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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
Hahahha!! That is adorable. And my GAWD but it looks out-of-this-world scrumptious!! You Brits do things up RIGHT!!! (Is there any left?)
This should be the cover for your poem compilation: Boom Meringue and Other Family Delights.
I couldn't love it more. xo
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Comment Written 21-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
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LOL! Thanks Rachelle :) None left though, I'm afraid. It didn't last long at all - we all have a sweet tooth! Thanks for the great feedback. Best wishes, Debra x