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NaPoWriMo 2019

Viewing comments for Chapter 21 "Boom Meringue!"
A poem a day - April 2019

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Comment from 24chas
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This was a great eat, er, I mean read. That looks absolutely delicious, Debra. I'm sure your whole family enjoyed that dish. Did Molly get any of it? Great job.

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
    Hi Chas :) Thanks for the feedback! The BoomMeringue was beautiful... Molly didn't get a look in though LOL (mean mummy I am!)
    Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
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This is such a cute and clever Whitney inspired by your daughter. Kid's say the darnedest things, don't they. I hope you all have a wonderful Easter, my friend~Debbie

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
    Thank you so much, Debbie :) I hope you had a great Easter too. Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written humorous and fun Whitney. Sometimes words sound something different as what it is in reality. When we see the fun in the misconception a favorite pudding gets a new name in the family circle.

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
    Hi Sandra :) Thank you for your feedback. Best wishes, Debra
Comment from humpwhistle
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A very creative and versatile dish--bird's nest and dessert all in one.
How did your daughter come up with the 'boo' part?
Anyway, Mom did a marvelous job.

Peace, Lee



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 Comment Written 21-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
    Cheers Lee :) I have no idea where she got the 'boo' bit, but it's stuck!
    Thanks for the feedback. Best wishes, Debra
Comment from Rachelle Allen
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Hahahha!! That is adorable. And my GAWD but it looks out-of-this-world scrumptious!! You Brits do things up RIGHT!!! (Is there any left?)
This should be the cover for your poem compilation: Boom Meringue and Other Family Delights.

I couldn't love it more. xo

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 Comment Written 21-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
    LOL! Thanks Rachelle :) None left though, I'm afraid. It didn't last long at all - we all have a sweet tooth! Thanks for the great feedback. Best wishes, Debra x