NaPoWriMo 2019
Viewing comments for Chapter 21 "Boom Meringue!"A poem a day - April 2019
15 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Debra. How cute and funny. Kids say some cute things. Your meringue looks festive and delicious for Easter. A very nice Whitney that brought a smile. Marilyn
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2019
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Hi Debra. How cute and funny. Kids say some cute things. Your meringue looks festive and delicious for Easter. A very nice Whitney that brought a smile. Marilyn
Comment Written 24-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2019
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Hi Marilyn :)
Thank you for your lovely feedback. I appreciate it. Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment from frogbook
Oh and I was giving YOU credit for that clever title-LOL. Lovely desert as well as an original poem about it. Looks like a perfect dish for Easter and seems to be a popular one in the family.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
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Oh and I was giving YOU credit for that clever title-LOL. Lovely desert as well as an original poem about it. Looks like a perfect dish for Easter and seems to be a popular one in the family.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
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Thank you so much, frog book :) I appreciate your feedback as always. Best wishes, Debra
Comment from Pam (respa)
-This was too cute to
pass up, Debra.
-The dessert looks
tempting, and I love
your author notes.
-You have an imaginative
daughter, and I commend you
for making the dessert
in the morning!
-Effective imagery and
rhyme in your poem.
-What did you call this
before your daughter
renamed this?
-Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
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-This was too cute to
pass up, Debra.
-The dessert looks
tempting, and I love
your author notes.
-You have an imaginative
daughter, and I commend you
for making the dessert
in the morning!
-Effective imagery and
rhyme in your poem.
-What did you call this
before your daughter
renamed this?
-Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
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Hi Pam :) Thank you for your lovely feedback. I appreciate it!
Before Rebecca renamed this pud Boom Meringue, it was just a plain old meringue nest!
Best wishes, Debra :)
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You are very welcome. I had to laugh at the names. You have a very creative daughter; does she take after her mom?!
Comment from Amenian Aypotheeno
Well the easter bunny has obviously been busy around your house! Love the light hearted feel of this whitney and title is awesome! That pudding does rather look delicious in both picture and your whitney description, so much so you just want to dive into the VDU and lick the screen (static shock just adds to the tingling feeling) but do not fear as I detest meringue, so I might only nick a candy egg from the top! I can see we can add cooking to the list of brilliant thing you can do!
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2019
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Well the easter bunny has obviously been busy around your house! Love the light hearted feel of this whitney and title is awesome! That pudding does rather look delicious in both picture and your whitney description, so much so you just want to dive into the VDU and lick the screen (static shock just adds to the tingling feeling) but do not fear as I detest meringue, so I might only nick a candy egg from the top! I can see we can add cooking to the list of brilliant thing you can do!
Comment Written 22-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2019
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Thanks for the lovely review and 6 stars, Dale :) I really appreciate it! Best wishes as always, Debra
Comment from ~Dovey
Hi Debra -
Boom Meringue - what a fun name for a dessert! It look scrumptious!
Nice job on your Whitney, each line bears the correct syllable count.
Much more interesting than a stick that comes back when you throw it! :)
Kim
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
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Hi Debra -
Boom Meringue - what a fun name for a dessert! It look scrumptious!
Nice job on your Whitney, each line bears the correct syllable count.
Much more interesting than a stick that comes back when you throw it! :)
Kim
Comment Written 22-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
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Hi Kim :) Thank you for your feedback. I appreciate it! Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment from JudyE
ooooohhhh. Can I come to dinner please? That looks so good. I love meringue - and chocolate eggs. I'm not sure where Rebecca got 'boomerang' from but 'Boom Meringue' fits well :)
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
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ooooohhhh. Can I come to dinner please? That looks so good. I love meringue - and chocolate eggs. I'm not sure where Rebecca got 'boomerang' from but 'Boom Meringue' fits well :)
Comment Written 21-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
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Hi Judy :) Me neither, but she's got it from somewhere and it's stuck! Thanks for the feedback. Best wishes, Debra
Comment from Lulube
mmmmm does that ever look good. I love a good cake. You a baker? Heard of a chocolate Mayonnaise cake. One of the best for sure. Online I would imagine. Cute and explicit poem. Can almost taste it
lulube
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
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mmmmm does that ever look good. I love a good cake. You a baker? Heard of a chocolate Mayonnaise cake. One of the best for sure. Online I would imagine. Cute and explicit poem. Can almost taste it
lulube
Comment Written 21-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
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Hi Lulube, I've not heard of that, but I'll google it! I love baking :)
Thanks for the feedback. Best wishes, Debra :)
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welcome
lulube
Comment from Sally Law
Okay, I am making this ASAP! How delicious this sounds and festive. A happy Easter to you all and many thanks for the delicious recipe idea in a poem!
All my best,
Sal xo
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
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Okay, I am making this ASAP! How delicious this sounds and festive. A happy Easter to you all and many thanks for the delicious recipe idea in a poem!
All my best,
Sal xo
Comment Written 21-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
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You're welcome, Sal! Thank YOU for the lovely feedback. Best wishes as always, Debra :) x
Comment from Heather Knight
I love meringue nests and always eat them when I'm in England. They are not easy to find over here.:(
Your dessert look lovely and your poem is beautiful as usual.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
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I love meringue nests and always eat them when I'm in England. They are not easy to find over here.:(
Your dessert look lovely and your poem is beautiful as usual.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
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Thanks so much, Maria :) Home made meringue is so much nicer than shop bought! Best wishes, Debra x
Comment from Joanna S. Blue
This is charming, delightful. I was definitely curious when I read the title. Children's language creations are often exactly right. The poem is very well done and with the picture, delicious.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
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This is charming, delightful. I was definitely curious when I read the title. Children's language creations are often exactly right. The poem is very well done and with the picture, delicious.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
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Thank you so much, Joanna :) I appreciate your feedback. Best wishes, Debra
