NaPoWriMo 2019
Viewing comments for Chapter 20 "Thinking To Myself"National Poetry Writing Month
5 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Alicia. Love the art and the concept of tangential thinking to self as we go about people watching. One thing leads to another and our brain follows along for the ride. You done this perfectly. Interesting, well described. Marilyn
reply by the author on 09-May-2019
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Hi Alicia. Love the art and the concept of tangential thinking to self as we go about people watching. One thing leads to another and our brain follows along for the ride. You done this perfectly. Interesting, well described. Marilyn
Comment Written 26-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 09-May-2019
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Thank you :)
Comment from bichonfrisegirl
Ha, all these different people to watch, and all of their differences is what makes the world go 'round. "God is all around me, and on my mind."
I love how you've built some humor into your observations and ponderings here, Alicia. Fave line ... "They probably sex a lot more often than normal to stay that skinny." LOL There's an element of truth to that. :)
This prose piece is refreshingly unique! Well done.
Hugs,
Connie
reply by the author on 13-May-2019
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Ha, all these different people to watch, and all of their differences is what makes the world go 'round. "God is all around me, and on my mind."
I love how you've built some humor into your observations and ponderings here, Alicia. Fave line ... "They probably sex a lot more often than normal to stay that skinny." LOL There's an element of truth to that. :)
This prose piece is refreshingly unique! Well done.
Hugs,
Connie
Comment Written 21-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 13-May-2019
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Hi Connie! The things we think of observing others. Thank you. Hugs, Alicia :)
Comment from Joan E.
Thank you for sharing your stream-of-consciousness reflections about what is going on around you. Some folks do not pay any attention to their surroundings and are missing out on a lot--not you! Enjoy the remains of Easter- Joan
reply by the author on 13-May-2019
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Thank you for sharing your stream-of-consciousness reflections about what is going on around you. Some folks do not pay any attention to their surroundings and are missing out on a lot--not you! Enjoy the remains of Easter- Joan
Comment Written 21-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 13-May-2019
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Hi Joan! You're nice. Thank you. Hugs, Alicia :)
Comment from James W. Reynolds
There is a lot to like here. First, the observations and plain-spoken style are great. It is a humorous poem, which is unexpected given how it starts out mentioning God. Finally, the use of prose is extremely effective as are the specific details (e.g., Cujos, Jesus Cologne, singing off-key and more). Nice work.
reply by the author on 13-May-2019
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There is a lot to like here. First, the observations and plain-spoken style are great. It is a humorous poem, which is unexpected given how it starts out mentioning God. Finally, the use of prose is extremely effective as are the specific details (e.g., Cujos, Jesus Cologne, singing off-key and more). Nice work.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 13-May-2019
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You're the best. Thank you. Hugs, Alicia :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Nothing has missed your gaze here as you see everyone and notice everything and believe that God is all around you. We learn from watching others and derive immense joy from those around us, your write is uplifting and joyous, Happy Easter Alicia, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 13-May-2019
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Nothing has missed your gaze here as you see everyone and notice everything and believe that God is all around you. We learn from watching others and derive immense joy from those around us, your write is uplifting and joyous, Happy Easter Alicia, love Dolly x
Comment Written 21-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 13-May-2019
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Hi Dolly! Hope you had a wonderful Mother's Day. Thank you. Hearts & hugs, Alicia :)
