NaPoWriMo 2019
Viewing comments for Chapter 20 "Beautiful"A poem a day - April 2019
11 total reviews
Comment from Amenian Aypotheeno
Ha, ha, well is this like the first trial of your new chocolate flavoured lipstick? Did she give you some choco-smacker imprints, to show how much she loved the flavour? Looks like you had some real family fun in this write and picture and it took the word beautiful in such a great direction in this cheeky whitney!
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
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Ha, ha, well is this like the first trial of your new chocolate flavoured lipstick? Did she give you some choco-smacker imprints, to show how much she loved the flavour? Looks like you had some real family fun in this write and picture and it took the word beautiful in such a great direction in this cheeky whitney!
Comment Written 22-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
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Hi Dale :) Thanks for your lovely feedback! She didn't give me a chocolate lip smacker, but instead wiped the lot on her sleeve as per usual!! Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment from Lulube
My, your kids are going to have a blast when they are adults and they sit around reading these creative poems about them. If only they knew that we just can't help ourselves using them to write about cause they are such great subjects and they fill our hearts. great fun
lulube
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
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My, your kids are going to have a blast when they are adults and they sit around reading these creative poems about them. If only they knew that we just can't help ourselves using them to write about cause they are such great subjects and they fill our hearts. great fun
lulube
Comment Written 21-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
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Thanks so much, Lulube :) I hope they enjoy reading them as much as I enjoy writing them! Best wishes, Debra
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welcome, I'm sure they will
lulube
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
Easter is a chocolate lovers paradise. I used to crave chocolate, but anymore it just doesn't taste as good. I think it is a hormonal thing. I enjoyed your Whitney, my friend~Debbie
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
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Easter is a chocolate lovers paradise. I used to crave chocolate, but anymore it just doesn't taste as good. I think it is a hormonal thing. I enjoyed your Whitney, my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 21-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
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Thank you, Debbie, for your feedback. I appreciate it. Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment from Shirley McLain
This is one of those pictures you always want to keep. I like the poem also. I didn't see a thing wrong with it. I hope you and your family have a great Easter. Blessings to you and yours. Shirley
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2019
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This is one of those pictures you always want to keep. I like the poem also. I didn't see a thing wrong with it. I hope you and your family have a great Easter. Blessings to you and yours. Shirley
Comment Written 21-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2019
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Thank you so much, Shirley :) Best wishes, Debra
Comment from Sally Law
I could give all your Whitney's a six. This one stole my heart and reminded me of my chocolate adoring granddaughter. Enjoy the long overdue sixer, dear Debra.
All my best,
Sal xo
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2019
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I could give all your Whitney's a six. This one stole my heart and reminded me of my chocolate adoring granddaughter. Enjoy the long overdue sixer, dear Debra.
All my best,
Sal xo
Comment Written 21-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2019
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Hi Sal :) Thank you so much for your beautiful review and 6 stars :) I appreciate both! Best wishes to you as always, Debra x
Comment from 24chas
This was funny, Debra. Your family seems to give you plenty of material to write these poems from. It's really great to read about it and your adventures with them. Great job.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2019
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This was funny, Debra. Your family seems to give you plenty of material to write these poems from. It's really great to read about it and your adventures with them. Great job.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2019
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Thank you, Chas :) I appreciate your feedback as always. Best wishes, Debra
Comment from Heather Knight
I wonder how they do it. Pablo is already fourteen and still gets ice cream all over her face, or tomato sauce when he eats pasta.
Anyway, you are right. She looks beautiful.
Thanks for another lovely poem.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2019
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I wonder how they do it. Pablo is already fourteen and still gets ice cream all over her face, or tomato sauce when he eats pasta.
Anyway, you are right. She looks beautiful.
Thanks for another lovely poem.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2019
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LOL! Kids are messy :D
Thanks for your lovely feedback, best wishes as always, Debra x
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Hahahaha, Omigosh! I remember these days! And I miss them terribly. What a delightful idea for a your book of poems this month, Debra. (And I do believe that's the cutest chocolate smile ever!) Adorable yet again. You're a natural at this challenge. xo
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2019
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Hahahaha, Omigosh! I remember these days! And I miss them terribly. What a delightful idea for a your book of poems this month, Debra. (And I do believe that's the cutest chocolate smile ever!) Adorable yet again. You're a natural at this challenge. xo
Comment Written 21-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2019
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Thank you, Rachelle :) I appreciate your lovely supportive feedback as always, love Debra x
Comment from JudyE
Kids, and some adults, can certainly make a mess with ice-cream. I thought for a minute that Rebecca was wearing black lipstick and holding a microphone.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2019
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Kids, and some adults, can certainly make a mess with ice-cream. I thought for a minute that Rebecca was wearing black lipstick and holding a microphone.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2019
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LOL! It does look like that at a glance! Thanks for your feedback, Judy :) Best wishes, Debra
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
The lips are much better chocolate coated and these snap shots are natural and always freeze the moment, much better not posed. Fun happy words for the fun happy occasion, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 25-Apr-2019
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The lips are much better chocolate coated and these snap shots are natural and always freeze the moment, much better not posed. Fun happy words for the fun happy occasion, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 21-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2019
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Thank you, Dolly, for your feedback :) Best wishes, Debra
