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Word Smushes - A Pet Peeve

When words run in together they lose their meaning

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Comment from JudyE
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I haven't heard the term 'smushing' before but I agree it's very annoying. How sincere can it be when someone you barely know puts ox (or rather xo- lol) after comments?

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
    Hahaha. Point well taken, Judy. I definitely earned that. I need to practice what I preach.
reply by JudyE on 21-Apr-2019
    Oh sorry. Did I put my foot in it? My husband says I only open my mouth to change feet. Maybe he has a point. :(
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
    No, it's fine; you're one hundred percent right.
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Comment from Phyllis Stewart
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Very clever! I love the word SMUSHES... will have to remember that.I I'm guilty of smushing words, I admit, but I do it for effect, not out of laziness. For examole: whatshisname, forgodssake, and a few others. But I wouldn't smush just any words. So maybe I'm a borderline smusher. :)

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
    I don't find those examples annoying; they're not for the purpose of conveying feelings to another person. So I think you get a clean bill of smush!

    Thanks for the fun review. I loved it.
Comment from susand3022
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Hi Rachelle, I want you to know that when I tell you that you write some of the funniest stuff I read, I mean it! It isn't just thoughtless gushing and I don't say it to everyone! ... oh and btw... I don't love you cuz I don't really know you. I hope you aren't offended... I do think you're probably a ton of fun but I'm not that kind of girl... hahahahaha!

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
    Hahahahaha.
    One of the perks of having been an educator so long is that I haven't had an ego in decades, so you can pretty much say whatever you want, and I won't be offended!!

    Thank you for the hilarious review!
Comment from Gail Denham
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Totally agree - "haveagoodday" is meaningless - unless spoken with meaning because perhaps it's raining and you wish to encourage the person to whom you suggest they have a good day.
A great way to describe these run-on words. Word smushes.
Thanks for a good poem

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
    Omigosh!! You are SOOO right about that one, Gail!!! I can't believe I left that one out!! Or, its cousin: "HaveAGoodOne!" Ugh!

    Thanks for the fun review. I loved it. xo
reply by Gail Denham on 21-Apr-2019
    And another that we've noticed that drives us nuts. Every time you give an order to a barrista or a waiter, they say "perfect". Before that it was "Cool" and so forth. do they even know what they say?
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
    Obviously not.
Comment from Michele Harber
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OK, I'm guilty of gushing, but not smushing. I gush because it's what I truly want to say, and fewer words don't quite get my meaning across. At least I'm an honest gusher.

Regarding your poem (yes, this was meant as a review, not a "disgushion"), I love the smooth flow and the intelligent rhymes (my favorite being "curmudgeon" and "bludgeon"). You have a charming sense of humor, and just the right touch of "righteous indignation." My only question is why, in the last stanza, you "rhyme" "rushing" and "smushes" when "smushing" would have kept up both the meaning and the rhyme. (You know you're reading a good poem when you're able to focus on minutiae like that.) Otherwise, it's a very enjoyable read.

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
    It was a typo, and I love you for catching it! Thank you again, my awesome editor!!! xo
reply by Michele Harber on 21-Apr-2019
    Your verry wellcome. Yuo can allways cuont on my eagel eye to katch any and alll mistooks.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
    Oh! I see Autocorrect has been at work this morning!!
reply by Michele Harber on 21-Apr-2019
    Why I don?t know what you mean (she says in her perfect Scarlett O?Hara ?Who, me?? voice).
Comment from tfawcus
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'Smushes' is a great coinage for these meaningless phrases. I'd include some of the desperately awful acronyms like OMG and LOL. In this largely Godless society, Oh, my God! seems to be blasphemy from the lips of professed atheists.

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
    Good point, Tfawcus. Another problem is, not a lot rhymes with them!!

    Thank you for this wonderful review! xo
reply by tfawcus on 21-Apr-2019
    How LOL does appal!
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
    Omigosh!! You did it!! Leave it to you, tfawcus!!! Maybe we should write a sequel together. Want to?! xo
Comment from Heather Knight
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I found your poem very interesting, but all the time I kept wondering if you were talking about real life or about reviews...
I hope I'm not using a word smush when I say 'thanks for sharing.'

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 Comment Written 20-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
    No, no; I'm talking about Real Life. I hear Thankyousomuch all. the. time. and it makes me CRAZY!!

    Whenever you've written 'thanks for sharing,' it's felt genuine, Maria. xo
reply by Heather Knight on 21-Apr-2019
    I think here in Spain we don't here Thank you so much (smushed or not) enough. Although things are changing and people are becoming more polite.
Comment from Sandra Elizabeth Williams
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Hehehe! Yes indeed, I hear these sweet nothings...that's what they're tantamount to...nothings. The person is saying the same thing to every gal or guy. Yeah, I know what you mean, Rachelle.

Not guilty though!!

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 Comment Written 20-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
    Thank you, Sandra, for this very validating review. (And notice I did not say thankyousomuch;you'rethebest!

    xo
reply by Sandra Elizabeth Williams on 21-Apr-2019
    LoL! You are the best though! I sincerely mean that.

    You are very welcome also, Rachelle.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
    Lol. Okay - from YOU I believe that it's sincere! xo You just made my night. (well, morning - it's 1:20 a.m.)
reply by Sandra Elizabeth Williams on 21-Apr-2019
    LoL! I do mean it! Good morning!
    Have a great rest of the weekend!
    xo
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
    You, too!
reply by Sandra Elizabeth Williams on 21-Apr-2019
    Thank you!