Spring Visit
A 4-line contest entry9 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
What a lovely dappled image to accompany your fine poem. Rhyming is excellent as is appropriate topic for the season. Much luck in the contest with this nice quatrain. Marilyn
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2019
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What a lovely dappled image to accompany your fine poem. Rhyming is excellent as is appropriate topic for the season. Much luck in the contest with this nice quatrain. Marilyn
Comment Written 20-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2019
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I am very pleased you like my quatraine. I think Spring?s visit may be lengthier this weekend. It?s lovely here.
Comment from lyenochka
Looks like a lovely spring day in that painting. Great rhyming quatrain form with even internal rhyming in the second line. Spring may not keep to a specific day but she does return when she wants to.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2019
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Looks like a lovely spring day in that painting. Great rhyming quatrain form with even internal rhyming in the second line. Spring may not keep to a specific day but she does return when she wants to.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2019
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Yes, indeed Spring has a mind of her own. Easter looks very promising here. I hope you have a lovely one, too. Many thanks for sharing SPRING VISIT and your kind praise.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and
presentation.
-You have used effective
imagery and the
correct rhyme scheme.
-I like the question and
answer format.
-I like how you use the
blossoms as prove that
spring will arrive.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2019
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-Nice artwork and
presentation.
-You have used effective
imagery and the
correct rhyme scheme.
-I like the question and
answer format.
-I like how you use the
blossoms as prove that
spring will arrive.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2019
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Thank you, Pam, for sharing SPRING VISIT. I truly appreciate your approval of the question and answer format and my blossom imagery.
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You are very welcome, and thanks for your nice reply.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Such a wonderful offering for this contest! :) First, it's focus is Spring -- hooray!! ;) But, more than that, you have given Spring her own personification and a role of 'messenger' and 'promiser'.... just great! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;) ;)
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2019
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Such a wonderful offering for this contest! :) First, it's focus is Spring -- hooray!! ;) But, more than that, you have given Spring her own personification and a role of 'messenger' and 'promiser'.... just great! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;) ;)
Comment Written 19-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2019
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I am delighted you enjoyed this short tribute to Spring and my personification of her as a visitor. Many thanks for sharing.
Comment from Sandra Elizabeth Williams
Lovely, but a bit sad that spring has not stayed and we are having awesome spring weather.
Hope she'll be back before long.
Your poem has met the requirements for the contest. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2019
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Lovely, but a bit sad that spring has not stayed and we are having awesome spring weather.
Hope she'll be back before long.
Your poem has met the requirements for the contest. Best wishes.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2019
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We are promised a lovely Easter, so I am hoping Spring will stick around. Many thanks for sharing, Sandra.
Comment from Gail Denham
Oh I do hope you're right. I do hope Spring is not going to leav e- here it's the middle of April and we've only just had two nice days in a row - but it's due to rain again tonight and perhaps be cold again.
Well, seasons change, move around.
Good poem - I like the sentiment of wishing spring would stay.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2019
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Oh I do hope you're right. I do hope Spring is not going to leav e- here it's the middle of April and we've only just had two nice days in a row - but it's due to rain again tonight and perhaps be cold again.
Well, seasons change, move around.
Good poem - I like the sentiment of wishing spring would stay.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2019
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We have similar roller coaster weather this April, but the forecast is for a lovely Easter. I am delighted you enjoyed my short poem.
Comment from 24chas
This was a good write. The flow was good as was the imagery in the piece. The artwork really enhanced your words perfectly. Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2019
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This was a good write. The flow was good as was the imagery in the piece. The artwork really enhanced your words perfectly. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2019
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I am delighted you enjoyed the imagery and artwork accompanying my short poem. Many thanks for sharing.
Comment from QC Poet
Beautiful four line quatrain capturing the Spring's re-awakening stirrings of blossoms. What a Great Lovely matching picture to the poem included.Thank you for Sharing your Gifts and insight.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2019
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Beautiful four line quatrain capturing the Spring's re-awakening stirrings of blossoms. What a Great Lovely matching picture to the poem included.Thank you for Sharing your Gifts and insight.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2019
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I am so pleased you enjoyed this short tribute to Spring and the accompanying artwork.many thanks for sharing.
Comment from l.raven
Oh I wish she would hurry up and come back...it is
blowing a gale here today...but it really is
a beautiful time of the season...very nicely written...
and I love your picture...love your poem...love Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2019
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Oh I wish she would hurry up and come back...it is
blowing a gale here today...but it really is
a beautiful time of the season...very nicely written...
and I love your picture...love your poem...love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 19-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2019
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I, too, wish Spring was not an infrequent visitor. Many thanks for your kind praise, Linda.
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your sooooo very welcome....love xxoo
