The Suspicion
Acrostic Story contest entry6 total reviews
Comment from LisaMay
Muppet Porn! I love it, you dirty bugger. The mental image of a masturbating frog made me spit my dentures 60 feet (read my story Chewing With My Mouth Open for elaboration and a chuckle).
I hope you come 2nd in this contest.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
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Muppet Porn! I love it, you dirty bugger. The mental image of a masturbating frog made me spit my dentures 60 feet (read my story Chewing With My Mouth Open for elaboration and a chuckle).
I hope you come 2nd in this contest.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
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Lol, nope I'm going for the gold. Haha. Have no fear, Lisa, I'm sure this dumb thing will go down in flames. Make fun of childhood icons and you're cast into the dark pit of shame, haha. Thank you for the great review and generous stars, Lisa. I'm glad you had a chuckle at this silliness. Have a great Easter.
Comment from LyndaS
There isn't a person on the planet who will not know the characters in this piece. This is almost refreshing after years of watching sanitized Sesame Street and The Muppet Show with my kids. A few things here cracked me up. Gonzo's chicken act flopped. I totally remember his fascination with chickens. Ha! Muppet porn. Too damn funny. Also I can see Kermit running around screaming after watching the video. And then in the end he buys her video and takes care of business. Nice touch. Hilarious!
I thought this was priceless and I'm impressed with the flow of this. Plus it's actually a complete story. I laughed through the whole thing. And I LOVED your Perfect Pig Pic!! (alliteration!) Well done and good luck in the vote. Lynda
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
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There isn't a person on the planet who will not know the characters in this piece. This is almost refreshing after years of watching sanitized Sesame Street and The Muppet Show with my kids. A few things here cracked me up. Gonzo's chicken act flopped. I totally remember his fascination with chickens. Ha! Muppet porn. Too damn funny. Also I can see Kermit running around screaming after watching the video. And then in the end he buys her video and takes care of business. Nice touch. Hilarious!
I thought this was priceless and I'm impressed with the flow of this. Plus it's actually a complete story. I laughed through the whole thing. And I LOVED your Perfect Pig Pic!! (alliteration!) Well done and good luck in the vote. Lynda
Comment Written 19-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
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Thank you so much for the fantastic review and the big six, Lynda. I don't know what made me think of this silliness but I just ran with it, lol. I'm glad you caught the references and liked the Miss Piggy pic. I thought it was priceless. Haha. Thank you again, Lynda. I dearly appreciate the gracious stars. Have a great day.
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You are welcome, sick puppy. :- )
Comment from giraffmang
Very entertaining, and I got a real kick out of this.
May want to look at the point below-
"Lights, camera, action." Someone shouted, out of view. - I would have a comma rather than a full stop before the closing speech marks here and lower case S for someone. I think you need to do this otherwise you don't meet the contest requirements as Someone becomes the start of a new sentence and breaks the acrostic nature of the piece.
crossed the mind of the puppet frog.- he's not a puppet, he's a muppet - these things are important! lol
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2019
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Very entertaining, and I got a real kick out of this.
May want to look at the point below-
"Lights, camera, action." Someone shouted, out of view. - I would have a comma rather than a full stop before the closing speech marks here and lower case S for someone. I think you need to do this otherwise you don't meet the contest requirements as Someone becomes the start of a new sentence and breaks the acrostic nature of the piece.
crossed the mind of the puppet frog.- he's not a puppet, he's a muppet - these things are important! lol
Comment Written 19-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2019
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Lol. I already fixed the goofs on the speech commas. Someone else mentioned it. I just threw the muppet puppet in there to be funny. Thank you for the great review, Gman. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked this silliness.
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Author,
Okay, you caught me. I totally missed the flag and then I was too caught up and had to know what happened. *smile* This was too stupid to be real, but I loved it. hahaha (What does that say about meeee????)
Notes:
1.) "Lights, camera, action(,)" (s)omeone shouted, out of view.
2.) "Waka waka(,)" (i)s all he said.
BTW, this is the ONLY entry I have seen so far that actually QUALIFIES for the contest. haha So you should do great. Good luck!
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2019
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Dear Mystery Author,
Okay, you caught me. I totally missed the flag and then I was too caught up and had to know what happened. *smile* This was too stupid to be real, but I loved it. hahaha (What does that say about meeee????)
Notes:
1.) "Lights, camera, action(,)" (s)omeone shouted, out of view.
2.) "Waka waka(,)" (i)s all he said.
BTW, this is the ONLY entry I have seen so far that actually QUALIFIES for the contest. haha So you should do great. Good luck!
Comment Written 19-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2019
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Lol, yeah, that's why I wrote it, because it is too dumb to be real. I always have to go that extra mile. Haha. Thank you for the great review and for pointing out the goofs, Robyn. I fixed them. Yes, I noticed that, not too many folks can seem to grasp the concept of the contest. What can you do? I really appreciate the gracious stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you had a chuckle at this silliness. Have a great weekend. Thank you again.
Comment from humpwhistle
I always knew there was something behind the Muppets. Now I know it was a masterbating hand. Maybe several.
Great job with the acrostics--your story didn't feel stilted to me.
I believe Jim Henson would have laughed at this.
Best of luck.
Peace, Lee
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2019
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I always knew there was something behind the Muppets. Now I know it was a masterbating hand. Maybe several.
Great job with the acrostics--your story didn't feel stilted to me.
I believe Jim Henson would have laughed at this.
Best of luck.
Peace, Lee
Comment Written 19-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2019
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Lol. Yeah, they weren't always just making them talk. Haha. Thank you for the great review, Lee. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
Comment from 24chas
This was really creative and I enjoyed the read. It was hilarious actually and I think you did well using the form to your advantage. Great job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2019
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This was really creative and I enjoyed the read. It was hilarious actually and I think you did well using the form to your advantage. Great job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2019
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Thank you for the excellent review, 24. I really appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked this ridiculous piece.
