Renaissance of Enchantment
Viewing comments for Chapter 19 "Chapter Six, Part 1"It was their world long before our existence...
17 total reviews
Comment from Janetsue
There are a lot of characters to keep in mind...I am very glad for you listing at the bottom of the chapters. They are all unique, however, and very intriguing. :-)
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2020
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There are a lot of characters to keep in mind...I am very glad for you listing at the bottom of the chapters. They are all unique, however, and very intriguing. :-)
Comment Written 26-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2020
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Certainly each have there own 'uniqueness' ... ;) :)
Comment from Sankey
A strange but good chapter. We have gone back a ways I think. Glad I am back onto this story can't wait to see where it is all going. Absolutely no spags.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2020
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A strange but good chapter. We have gone back a ways I think. Glad I am back onto this story can't wait to see where it is all going. Absolutely no spags.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2020
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Oh, yeah, this one's got a lot to keep track of... ;) :) Thanx for hanging in there! ;) Yvette
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
I guess a stranger came upon the scene and really no one knew who he was for sure. The move that they are making will be adventurous. It will be definitely overwhelming at first.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2020
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I guess a stranger came upon the scene and really no one knew who he was for sure. The move that they are making will be adventurous. It will be definitely overwhelming at first.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2020
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Gonna be interesting to be sure... ;)
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
There no need to answer all my reviews. I am catching up on this story and making a little money. The story is very interesting.
Love the large black font!
Glad to see that Addy came on board to support the move to Alabama.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2020
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There no need to answer all my reviews. I am catching up on this story and making a little money. The story is very interesting.
Love the large black font!
Glad to see that Addy came on board to support the move to Alabama.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2020
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You and me and the font - so much kindred spirits! The font on many of the offerings here are SOOOOO small! ;) :)
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Need to ask Tom to tell everyone to enlarge their fonts. I copy posts, and put them Word so I can read them....
Comment from JudyE
I didn't find any glitches and don't have any suggestions. It is much easier to follow the story by reading one chapter after another. I'm enjoying it very much.
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2019
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I didn't find any glitches and don't have any suggestions. It is much easier to follow the story by reading one chapter after another. I'm enjoying it very much.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2019
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Hooray -- you're almost caught up!! :) I have to tell you that I'm really excited to have you on board!! ;) ;) Take care over under there...LOL! ;)
Comment from Debbie Pope
This chapter needed a six star rating, Yvette. I enjoyed it immensely. I had to refresh myself with some old chapters to get some of the characters straight, but I am ready to read now. I love Punky-DeJesus. He's just another quirky character for me to get to know.
Good to talk to you.
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2019
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This chapter needed a six star rating, Yvette. I enjoyed it immensely. I had to refresh myself with some old chapters to get some of the characters straight, but I am ready to read now. I love Punky-DeJesus. He's just another quirky character for me to get to know.
Good to talk to you.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2019
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Hey, Beautiful Lady -- sorry I'm so far behind -- my goal is to be OFFICIALLY caught up by day's end and start really writing again tomorrow! ;) ;) You are so awesome to give this six stars... I really tried to build for what I have ready to pour out of my mind but I had so much staring me in the face at the time (and so much already on my plate then!) that I worried that I ran some folks off... there are less reviews no matter how much I promote, but I guess that could simply be due to the fact that (1) it's fantasy and not widely appealing and (2) I do write 'epically' in that it's not just focused on a few folks/characters. :) ;) I love them all, though, and I feel it's necessary to give them all 'meaning' ... LOL! :) ;) They're all researched and fully developed in my head so I just like to make sure everyone else can share them in their world! ;) :)
I do hope you get to feeling better make sure you get yourself some
ginkgo and ginseng tea and just enjoy a strong cup each day (I use real sugar, but I know others insist on stevia.... I'm just a 'go cane or go home' kinda girl, I guess)!! :) ;) And, most of all, take good care of you!! I'll check in .....
Yvette
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Thanks again for your concern. As to your writing, your brain is epic so of course your story is as well. I love it. I'm about to start watching So You Think You Can Dance, my favorite show. That should cheer me up.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-writtten chapter. Any time there is a change in our lives it seems to be a big mountain in front of us. Only after the change is made we start to see what the bigger plan is.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2019
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A very well-writtten chapter. Any time there is a change in our lives it seems to be a big mountain in front of us. Only after the change is made we start to see what the bigger plan is.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2019
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Thank you so very much, Sandra, for keeping up with Maggie and the gang! ;) I'm going to try to get something out mid-may, but who knows with the crazy schedule right now! ;) ;) YVette
Comment from F. Wehr3
This is an interesting story, Yvette. I liked the descriptive scene in Punky's apartment and Maggie's uneasiness. It felt surreal in its depiction.
Take care,
Russell
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2019
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This is an interesting story, Yvette. I liked the descriptive scene in Punky's apartment and Maggie's uneasiness. It felt surreal in its depiction.
Take care,
Russell
Comment Written 20-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2019
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Thanks for stopping in for a quick read... surreal is definitely a word... :) Yvette
Comment from lyenochka
I want to feed Plunky, too, from your description. It's an interesting bond between Addy and Maggie. And it's very much like a real single parent and child situation when the child suddenly asserts himself to be more grown-up just as Addy did just now. Great job in building up the relationship for the reader.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2019
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I want to feed Plunky, too, from your description. It's an interesting bond between Addy and Maggie. And it's very much like a real single parent and child situation when the child suddenly asserts himself to be more grown-up just as Addy did just now. Great job in building up the relationship for the reader.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2019
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Thank you so very much, Helen, for keeping up with Maggie and crew.... now if I can just make it through the next few weeks so that we can move them along!! ;) ;) Thanx for stopping in! ;) ;) Yvette
Comment from susand3022
EEEEE!!!!! Thank you MBLOS for the next chapter of your book as you are heading into the abyss that will be your next few weeks! I went on the tour of my son's Jr. College yesterday. One building! The whole thing is just in one building!!! What a lucky little turd!!! No dodging raindrops, sleet, freezing rain or just plain freezing weather between classes as you go from building to building like I did all those years. It's one big-ass building though, let me tell you! Stairs and ramps... as well as an elevator (thank God!) 6 floors and the place is built like a ship. And the girl couldn't take us around one floor, then the next and so on... she had to go up and down, up and down...up and down... I thought I was going to die... After sitting largely on my (now very large) backside since August healing these ankles, my ass is killing me today!!! LOL
Again... thanks for the read! And boy is everyone going to be pissed when they find out she put Addisons name on the will! LOL
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2019
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EEEEE!!!!! Thank you MBLOS for the next chapter of your book as you are heading into the abyss that will be your next few weeks! I went on the tour of my son's Jr. College yesterday. One building! The whole thing is just in one building!!! What a lucky little turd!!! No dodging raindrops, sleet, freezing rain or just plain freezing weather between classes as you go from building to building like I did all those years. It's one big-ass building though, let me tell you! Stairs and ramps... as well as an elevator (thank God!) 6 floors and the place is built like a ship. And the girl couldn't take us around one floor, then the next and so on... she had to go up and down, up and down...up and down... I thought I was going to die... After sitting largely on my (now very large) backside since August healing these ankles, my ass is killing me today!!! LOL
Again... thanks for the read! And boy is everyone going to be pissed when they find out she put Addisons name on the will! LOL
Comment Written 19-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2019
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Yeah, my third will be doing something like that.... he's our 'challenge' so far as variety of interests.... I do believe he'll end up at a tech school though as he just LOVES to work with his hands with metal and such. :) ;) Good by me... last I checked, machinists, welders, and even mechanics make good money!! ;) ;)
And what is up with the ankles? That must have been before I walked into your life... LOL! ;) ;)
Glad you enjoyed this one -- would like to say I'd get another one out soon, but I feel like drowning just thinking about making it to Monday... Ugh! But, the bright part is, once I make it to Monday, one-third of our 'items' will be off the to-do list... I think. I try not to think too hard! ;) ;) LOL! Take care! ;) Yvett
