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wrapped refrain style 1 for potlatch12 total reviews
Comment from Karen Payton Holt
Hi,
You struck a deft tone of dread and helplessness.
I like the way you laid out the family connections, someone gone from your home for many years but still, in times of trouble, we reach out.
Karen
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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2019
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Hi,
You struck a deft tone of dread and helplessness.
I like the way you laid out the family connections, someone gone from your home for many years but still, in times of trouble, we reach out.
Karen
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Comment Written 18-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2019
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thanks very much for reading and reviewing.
Comment from frogbook
Very sad, emotional and relatable. Wondering on the phone what we will hear and hoping its not what we think. Great description that flowed well like a conversation.
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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2019
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Very sad, emotional and relatable. Wondering on the phone what we will hear and hoping its not what we think. Great description that flowed well like a conversation.
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Comment Written 18-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2019
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I was trying to create a wrapped refrain, and failing, when the wife's niece called...I am the world's worst at comforting the ill or bereaved, so I wrote about it...thanks for reading.
